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Khnite's Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by khnite, Nov 15, 2008.

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  1. khnite

    khnite Member

    Khnite's Poem *updated August 12th, 2009*

    This is a poem I wrote a long time ago, maybe a year a two ago. Anyway it reminds me of Kingdom Hearts.
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    Moving closer to impending doom
    Guilt and greed moves us on,
    We fled but face the evening dawn
    Quivering and racing towards our death
    Asking for forgiveness, we try our best
    Such grief and sadness we hold in our hearts
    We shall always be apart in mind
    Hate and curses that controlled us
    Shall make our souls, forever bound
    Last two we jest until one falls
    But end up that we both don’t stand at all
    Two hearts competing, two friends now rivals
    A fate not as cruel as the one that had past
    A love that would never last
     
    Last edited: Aug 12, 2009
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  2. OH MY GOD KHNITE YOU'RE ALIVE! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

    In case you didn't realise, I still remember you as the first friend I had here. :D :D :D :D :D They may have destroyed our Spam Lounge, but they can never destroy our spirit!

    You are 18 now huh? Guess you've no time for little ol' shadow *sniff* But I'll remember you. Now where's Ultima, I've gotta go tell him the good news....

    Oh and I guess I should comment on the poem.... xD

    I think you told me this before, and I like it just as much now, as I did then. I always get a nice rhythm for good poems, and if I can get one, then it's a good poem :)
     
  3. Beloved

    Beloved Azure's Beloved

    That was really got mate. Serious skillz you got.
     
  4. RebelMurf

    RebelMurf Hero of the Wild

    i like the poem, but i cant seem to find the connection between it anf Kh could you explain how they are related?
     
  5. khnite

    khnite Member

    well for me, i think about how Riku and Sora had to fight against eachother because each of them thought they had the right to have the keyblade, from the first game. it might no be so clear but for me it is. >__>;
    I feel like they had a powerful bond that was put on the line because of keyblade. But thats my intrepertation, it can seen in many different ways.
    Also, after i written written this poem, it reminded me of KH. At times i have no idea what my poems mean until later. i kind of write poems when the inspiration hits me. look at me i keep babbling on and on.
    so i hope cleared up and answered your question. if not, i'll try to explain it more if i can.
     
  6. khnite

    khnite Member

    Another poem but its a little dark, so BEWARE!

    :Dthank you shadoweddestroyer, Dark Riku, and Kairu for the comments. it makes me happy.:D
    i have a lot of poems to share so i can post some more later on. in fact here is a recent one i have written:

    The Gateway to Hell

    The gateway to Hell,
    It’s a beautiful place, this gateway to hell. It is ageless and condemned for no one really appreciates it.

    This is the place where fallen people walk past who were notorious for their sins. They are rapist, killers, drinkers, abusers, the damned and the non-religious.

    They walk through this gate and never notice its features for it is the last decent thing to see before they disappear. Then the nightmares begin and storm of eternal pain commences for their souls, banished from the earth.

    No letters, no lovers, no mothers can reach here for nothing can pass the gateway to hell. For the fallen is haunted and shall haunt others, it is their curse, their price.

    The gateway to hell is flawless and grand. The height is colossal and overwhelming. No scholar can define it, no radar can detect it.

    The gateway that swallows the fallen is a beautiful place, but no one really appreciates it.
    A satirical laugh can be heard from the inside.
     
  7. Aqua Fresh

    Aqua Fresh Anita ✿◠‿◠

    Hey Khnite, I love that peom. Do you like writing peoms?
     
  8. khnite

    khnite Member

    yes, i do. ^_^
     
  9. Kyuu

    Kyuu your worst nightmare.

    You're good at this! ^^
     
  10. khnite

    khnite Member

    Rhyme that is Out of Line

    Lazies and daisies come to the parries where snow blows up in the noon.
    A second, a blip you see the swing hip of jolly yet folly raccoon.
    Jigsaws and pixels are ramified crystals at a query space rental.
    The clouds seem so shady while they all cry out “Old lady”, as the moon silently waits for a tune.
    Crazy old radios succumb to the facade of coyotes’ rambunctious balloons.
    As I try to rhyme, I realized that its not always divine.
    A cornerstone of my mind might see it as sublime but that should be a crime in this day of time.
    You have to sing this in a sing tone voice to make it sound like a good choice.
    I love how this going this is quite a showing of what I know not to do.
    I thought the conversation was engaged but the one I spoke to was rearranged to a book of smarts; I rather eat tarts than start on a pedestal of haze.
    Yet I crave for a cookie or two or three as long as its soft and snookie for me.
     
  11. khnite

    khnite Member

    I haven't updated for a long time. >__>;
    But i will try to post more poems when I get the chance.

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    Obsession

    Obsession, obsession. I see a progression from crazy to insane.
    It twinkles with madness, it twinkles with glee
    A soft breeze, wrapping my head in a cloud of ecstasy.
    Love, love. I see blindness from the truth to lies.
    It causes denial, it causes fantasy.
    Heart clenched in anxious yearnings for intimacy.
    Thoughts, logic, meaning are non-existent in this world.
    All that matters is an object, a person.
    A life that is not bounded by rules of human kind,
    for those rules are ridiculous anyway.
    Nectar so sweet that it evaporates and with a slight intake of breath, you would be in heaven.
    A dirty obsession, a love not so kind.
    One that has possessed my mind.
    I wish, I wish someone could stop the bliss,
    For I am addicted to it, craving for it.
    In the end I am left with a bitter taste that no one could ever forget.
     
  12. Goldfish

    Goldfish Cats in the Cradle

    It's things like this which would have made the English Subject cool. Too bad we never did it when I was there and so I hated the subject.
    Bravo, I love all these poems! It actually makes me like the English Subject! =D
     
  13. khnite

    khnite Member

    Yay another poem! :D

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    Another Day

    Ripples widen as the water spreads
    Mechanically, soullessly.
    Tears from an orphaned son that had his mother,
    taken away by the morning sun.
    Rusted, dried for nothing can hide.
    One day after another they speak to him.
    The crows mock, the coyotes laugh,
    Nature as cruel as it can get.
    Droplets fall off winter leave,
    The dry earth drinks it greedily.
    No time to waste, all for that face of dear and bitter content.
    Hunger and change will rage down the page,
    Nothing seems to be going his way.
    Hours of walking, hours of talking.
    The birds are still mocking.
    Prickly leaves jump heavily as the wind from the west
    Begins its usual test.
    One day he woke up from a dream and thought he saw misty steam,
    Floating around the cherry tree.
    It felt so dense, it felt so warm.
    Milky as a white snowstorm.
    Heart rapidly beating as he fell off the ground rocky floor.
    No pain, none at all.
    He looked up, staring at the rocky moon,
    The coyotes are still laughing.
    Will this end; his mind is near the end.
    Messes being up, clueless and can’t make up.
    Which way to go, which path to seek.
    Weak he thought, pathetic he yelled.
    Carelessly whipped out from the rain.
    His mind was slowly going insane.
    Was it a new strain of drugs or pills?
    Was it a new feeling or dreaming?
    The sun hasn’t shown for a while at home.
    Maybe this is a new day for him, a new life.
    Freedom? But it didn’t feel satisfying, it was mortifying.
    He clung on to the pillow, weeping a little, not knowing what to do.
    Sadist and whiners go out to the diners to have a sip of whiskey and gin.
    A hawk cries out as he is on the prowls for a rigid meal.
    What's the deal, doesn’t even sound real.
    His mind is drifting further and further from the so-called truth.
    He took a breath and said his goodbyes.
    Laying in the darkness where he happily resides.
     
  14. Moar poems =D

    Written by request of other people.

    Beautiful World

    We are the destroyers
    The greatest of the enemy
    With us still here this beautiful world
    Can never be free

    Our eyes pass over all the land
    But never drink it in
    Why is it that not one God
    Has informed us of this sin

    The rustle in the waking trees
    As the first of Spring emerge
    The flourishing of greens and blues
    To be saved we must be purged

    Chatter now is in full swing
    We complain as the beauty sings its songs
    The buds burst and attract the bees
    We kill them and tally up our wrongs

    The heat brings another onslaught
    Of buzzing things and blazing rays
    We beat off the flourescent things
    And whitter away our many days

    Orange and yellow and brightest reds
    Silently to us they implore
    For us to mend our brutal ways
    For death is opening their door

    The crunching browns under foot
    The rustle in these fallen shunned
    But the critters of similar visage
    Who care and comfort them are simply stunned

    We have abused the waving grasses
    And now the soldiers who fought to live
    And the glorious blue above
    Is running out of beauty to give

    The crisp of whiteness so pure
    And though many other things have died
    We live our lives as before
    Even though Mother Nature cried

    Settled flakes upon the fallen
    The shrubs and plants and trees
    Every inch is begging us to simply
    'Stop doing this to us, if you please'

    We know the planet lives once more
    And overlook all the astounding colour again
    We ignore the cycle once more believing it
    Protected as an egg by a mother hen

    But the beauty will not stay
    Of it's own free will
    One day it'll vanish and we shall
    Our hearts with dread begin to fill


    What a beautiful word
    But the growing greyness we cannot flee
    Simply because while the planet grows impatient
    And knows all that is happening to it
    The pain is so intense that we cannot see
    The sight of the immensity of green
    And blue and yellow and so many more
    And one day all come to realise with a jolt that

    With us still here this most beautiful of worlds
    Can never be free
     
  15. Radiance

    All those many shrouded faces,
    And those equal many hidden places,
    Are simply not for I,
    For I must have something to defy.

    I strut boldly through the town,
    And though as standard other heads are down,
    On me their eyes are now locked,
    And every face I glance upon is shocked.

    I return each and every gaze,
    They receive this as a form of praise,
    And their shrouded face and lowered head,
    And torn asunder and then shed.

    The veil of blindness is lifted clear,
    Faces under it full of joy not fear,
    Because that demonic veil of ignorance,
    Has been shattered by my radiance.
     
  16. khnite

    khnite Member

    An Empty Canvas

    My heart feels woes and pains because I have gained nothing more than hot air.
    I batted and chatted and he grew angry by my careless whim.
    Was I too happy or was I teasing him too much?
    What did I do, my dear, to make you so livid?
    I feel a taint of guilt in my throat.
    A tinge of regret, I reach to grab the last few words that slipped out of my lips.
    Now stuck posted for the world to see.
    I lie low in shame, feeling the blame wielded up inside my padded ribs.
    I slash my sides and the cut, oh how it stings, to let out my tinge of heartache.
    But nothing comes out and I am left unstained.
    I want to wrap my arms around you and protect you from the mind that makes you feel like nothing, want nothing, be nothing.
    Let me kiss you pale cheeks that are drenched with sadness.
    Please, I want joy to rush and give you color to your face, my dear.
    Please let it enter and fill the empty canvas, so I can create a masterpiece that would make you smile for an eternity.
     
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