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Los Dos Cazadores (Privado)

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Reonarudo Butsuchiru, Feb 27, 2010.

  1. The mariachi man torn after her and went past her. The man turned a corner and the mariachi man followed him close by. For a short and stocky man he was pretty fast on his feet. The man ran down the dusty night road and past a few old people that were conversing and the mariachi man kicked up more dust behind him and took to a side street after seeing him go into his black el camero and attempting the drive off. He leaped off the overhead ledge of a small building and landed on the clean car and smashed the window and kicked the man out of the vehicle.

    He tumbled on the dirt floor for a few minutes and lay there on his back panting heavily. The mariachi man got out and placed a firm knee on his bounty's chest and placed a well made knife at his throat. "Mister Alvarez, you've been captured for the crimes of extortion and bribing. You'll be turned in alive so that I can claim my bounty from this towns sheriff."

    He looked over his shoulder to she the woman finally catching up and flipped some strand of hair from his face and said to her, "Buenas noches again miss...I am Rafael, the man of a thousand blades..."
     
  2. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    The women looked at Rafael and raised an eyebrow at how fast he ran a caught up to him. She looked and put her hands to her hips. "Nice to meet you..my name is Milagros." She said walking up to him a kissing him on the cheek. "This was fun...lets do it again some other time." She smiled and walked back to the inn, she walked up the marbled stairs and took out her keys from her pocket. She went to her room and jumped into her bed yawning really loud and the room echoing her yawn. She was thinking about Rafael how handsome he looked. She shook her head and smiled. She got up form her bed and walked to the kitchen she noticed it looked exactly like Rafael room. The velvet bed sheets the lamps embroiled with golden fake jewels. she chuckled and took out a little carton of milk from the refrigerator and drank it all. She walked up to her bed took off her shoes. She paused and notice she left her hoodie in the liquor bar. She signed and shrugged. She has plenty of hoodies why complain about that one...it didn't had anything in it's pockets. She signed and closed her eyes and slept.
     
  3. Capítulo Dos: El Amante

    Rafael had been wandering the night streets of the same town for some time. It was around one in the morning and he had just finished turning in Alvarez over to the sheriff of the town were he was taken away and he was given his 45,000 pesos. It was a very small bounty in all consideration but he felt that he was doing the town a favor and that was good enough for him.

    As the dust kicked up into the night breeze he heard a shuffling in a dark alley not to far from the inn in which he was staying at. The shops were closed so assumed it was a robber trying to break into someone's home so he pushed out his right hand and a small blade colored knife slivered into his grasp and he slowly stalked his way until he saw what was going on.

    A young woman who was dressed very revealingly was trying to open a door. She was frantically looking up and down the splintered door for a way to escape. When she turned her face to him he saw that her face was streaked with dark black marks, obviously showing signs that she had been crying. She pressed her body to the wall and began to whimper. "Por favor, por favor no me mates..." she shakily murmured.

    Rafael raised an eyebrow and put his knife away and walked towards her hands outstretched trying to show that he wasn't hostile to her but she kept on shaking violently. "What has happened to her?" he thought to himself as he was about a few inches away from him. He fell to her knees and began to fiddle with his belt whimpering still, "If you want me to make you feel good I can, just let me go please!"

    He pushed her hands away and grabbed her by the shoulders and shook her for a moment and asked her in a hissing voice, "What's going on?!" When her eyes widened in horror from his eyes he turned to see three men with automatic weapons aimed at them.

    The man in the middle threw down a cigarette and stepped on it with his heel, "Perra estúpida, ahora tú y tu novio se va a morir. Mátalos!"

    The weapons opened fire but before making their deadly contact, the man in the mariachi outfit grabbed the woman by the waist and dived into the rotting wooden door. "Well Milagros...this is the long night you told me about."
     
  4. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

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    It was the dead of the night a scream pierced the silent night. More screams followed, gradually becoming more choked before they vanished altogether. Milagros woke up from her bed when she heard the screams,and she fell again from her bed bringing the bed sheets with her. She hits her head on the wooden floor and got up rubbing her head. "Ay! conyo..." she got up and walked to the kitchen grabbing some tea from the cabinet, she started to boil water and left it there for a couple minutes. She then put three tea-bags on the water until it turned brown. She grabbed a plastic cup that was next to the coffee grinder and poured some tea on the cup. She drank it slowly until she heard a loud knock on her door. She raised an eyebrow walked towards the door looking through the hole quietly without making any sound. She thought it was very suspicious having somebody knock in her door in the middle of the night. She looked through the peep hole and noticed it was a really handsome teenage boy with golden blue eyes and black hair tanned skin. He was wearing mariachi clothes similar to Rafael. But it was white and he had on a little sombrero. She smiled and opened the door. "Quien eres tu? she asked clicking her tongue. The teenage boy eyes widen when he saw her and coughed a couple of times. "Hola senorita me llamo Rob y yo soy el hijo de la dueno de esta cusada." he answered taking off his sombrero in respect. Milagros looked at him suspiciously, took her keys form her pocket and gave it to the teenager. "Toma y bete yo ya me voy de aqui..." she shrugged and threw the cup in the trash bin she walked silently as the boy blinked and scratched his head confused. "Now where should I go...." asked Milagros to herself, since it was all quiet outside. She walked down the marble smooth stairs and almost tripped on a black cat tail. She shivered when she saw the cat, jump town three stairs. Until she made it outside. She looked up at the sky and noticed it looked starry and beautiful the sky had shades of green and purple and bright yellow stars. Milagros started to think about a story her grand mom told her a story that she'll never forget. It thought her a lesson to never leave your dreams to always go for what she wants there's always a way to get it. She smiled and looked up and the sky as one tear fell from her brown eyes.
     
  5. Rafael's back slammed against the slate wall of the small building and advacned up the stairs quickly with his hand grasped tightly on the woman's hand as they scrambled up the stairs. "What the hell do they want from this woman?!" They ran to the end of the stairs and he slammed the door behind them shut. One of the men in the same suit kicked in the door opposite of them and raised the automatic weapon at them. Rafael threw the woman on the ground to help her dodge the zinging bullets. From his sleeves, he got two of the same medium sized knives and leaped on the man and cut his throat, hitting his jugular and sending him down the stairs out the other end of the door. He waved to the woman on the ground rapidly and shouted at her, "COME ON, COME ON, RAPIDO!!!"
     
  6. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Milagros took out one cigarette from her pocket and lit it up smoking it and taking big whiffs. She noticed that when she woke up she heard screams that faded away really quick. She shrugged and thought it was just one of the little kids around the inn playing hide and go seek. But it wasn't the kids it was real and she knew what she heard. She heard screams real people screaming not little kids playing. She threw the cigarette in the ground and stepped on it. She noticed right in front of her were two older grown men eying her. She looked at them and gave them a nod. She walked away but noticed that they were following her, she walked in a faster pace. Then they did too. She decided to run for it, she ran to street to street until she made it to a large fence, it was lock she couldn't escape at all. She tried to climb it but there wasn't nothing to grip. She took her knife from her pocket and aimed it at the guy forehead, with one throw it hit him right on the mark. "YES!" she said giving a large grin and looking at the other one. "Que tu quieres yo no tengo nada para ti..." she said taking he second knife from her pocket. "A si....tu tienes algo que yo quiero mujer..." he said taking a few steps back but then giving a freaky smile.

    She took a few steps back wishing Rafael was here with her fighting beside her. But he wasn't.....she shook her head. "Where is he...?"
     
  7. Rafael and the unknown woman ran down the rattling metallic stairs of the building and looked out. The sun was peeking out over the distant horizon and he looked over the ledge and saw the men in hot pursuit. He grabbed the woman by the hand and ran to the edge of the roof and looked down. It wasn't a steep fall but it would dangerous and to time consuming to recover after the landing. He pushed the woman back and told her to jump.

    Frantically she looked at him and shouted, "What are you crazy?!"
    "Yes, now go! Go now!"

    She reluctantly nodded to the command and heeded his request and stepped back. She ran forward, her bare feet skiffing on the sandy roof and leaped forward. She landed on the ground and stumbled and continued. She looked back at him and turned up a sinister smile. Rafael's eyes widened at the relized setup and turned around to see two men armed with automatic weapons aim and fire at him. He raised his hands up in a febble attempt to block the bullets. He gritted his teeth as three bullets ripped into his right shoulder, side, and right side of his chest.

    He fell off the building and hit the ground with a loud thump and rolled over to see Milagros running towards him but not to him. "Damn it..."
     
  8. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Milagros ears twitched when she heard a loud gun shot. She looked at the guy right in front of her and took a couple steps back she looked to her side and saw a little alley way, she crossed her fingers and ran. Taking her gun that was in her pocket she remembered a shot a couple of times at the guys that started to chase her. She shot at the first guy on his leg and arm and he stumbled to the ground. That makes four bullets left on her gun she didn't had any more bullets so she just ran, the other man chased her. As she ran she saw a figure lying on the ground as she got closer she noticed it was Rafael. Her eyes widen when she noticed he was shot about three times she knew it because she saw blood stains on his clothes. She deiced to shoot the guy that was chasing her right on the forehead. She had no choice she had to do it. Milagros ran towards Rafael and feel to her knees looking straight at him. "Who did this to you Rafael was it one of those guys?" she asked trying to help him up but she couldn't because he was hurt. "Let me try to heal you..." taking a knife from her pocket she ripped his shirt off looking at the three wounds that he had. Her eyes widened and noticed that the gun shots were pretty deep. She signed and looked at Rafael. "I'm gonna have to take you somewhere safe...this place is dangerous and your bleeding..." she cut three pieces of her shirt and wrapped it around his right shoulder. She had to do something she couldn't let him die. She picked tried to help him and and hold him piggy bank style and ran. Milagros went to the inn and asked for another room paying extra money fir the room and a first aid kit. The women that gave her the keys and first aid kit the lady eyes were blank when she saw Rafael. Milagros rolled her eyes and walked to the third floor 3F and opened the door. This time the room looked different instead of red velvet sheets it was aquamarine blue. The walked to the bed and told Rafael to lye down without moving. "I'll....help you.." Milagros says pointing her knife on the shoulder wound.
     
  9. Rafael's eyes looked glassy and light from the room kept blinding him. He heard a voice speaking to him and he saw the face of his wife and smiled. She was speaking, but he could hear nothing from her lips. He reached up and touched her face and whispered her name. He was dead but he didn't care, he was with his family. However, when things slowly became clearer to him, his jouyous expression warped and turned to a contortion of sorrow and hatred. His glassy eyes watered violently as he weakly grabbed the arm of Milagros and shook her shoulder, cursing wildly.
     
  10. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Milagros took the bullets out of Rafael. She noticed that he was smiling and talking to himself. She put a hot damp tower on his forehead. Milagros wrapped his wounds and stood next to him looking at him. She noticed that he was still talking to himself. She took the damp towel and wet it some more and put it back on his forehead. She stayed there for a couple of minutes waiting for him to wake up. She got closer to him and her eyes widen when she saw that Rafael woke up grabbing her shoulder and cursing wildly. "Cal down calm down Rafael...everything is fine what's wrong?" she ask pulling him down trying not to make him move because if he did then his wounds would open, and then she has to start all over again. "I saved your life..."
     
  11. Rafael looked from side-to-side breathing rapidly and saw that the woman he had once believed to be his wife in the afterlife was the woman that he had met only a day ago. He was about to get up but his body throbbed from the pain. He looked over and saw a bloody cloth with three bloody and gory bullets on it. He felt the bed he was lying on get damp with his own blood and began to sweat. His tears pilted on the sheets and clenched his fists. "Him . . . he tried to kill me . . ."
     
  12. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Milagros looked at Rafael with sad eyes and looked away. "Don't move Rafael your wounds will open again and I don't think that this dumb inn has any first-aid kits left," she said removing the damp cloth from his fore head and pouring it on some ice-cold water she put on a large bowl that had fake golden rubies all over it. "Tomorrow you can move but please stay in bed. If you want anything I'll be here, watching you," she said giving a half smile and scratching the side of her nose. "Now I have to change, my clothes is all bloody...stay in bed or else." she says smiling taking off her shoes and walking to the bathroom closing it shut.
     
  13. Rafael stayed motionless except for moving his head to observe the room. He was somewhat amazed that he had the strength to carry him all the way up here on her own. Looked down and saw his dusty boots and saw his jacket. It had three holes in it and he cursed under his breathe but calmed down seeing that nothing else had been removed from the jacket. He sighed and rested his throbbing head on the soft pillow and closed his eyes.

    He turned his head to the left and saw the aquamarine curtains get brighter from the sunlight. It was about 7:00, he didn't really know and he didn't care. All he knew is that he needed to get out of the town. More men would be coming after him. He closed his eyes again and fell asleep.
     
  14. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Milagros woke up from sleeping on the floor without any bed sheets,she gave it all to Rafael. She got up and looked at Rafael he was still sound asleep snoring softly and stopping every few seconds. She walked up to him and stared at him for a few seconds she took the cloth out form his forehead and touched his cheeks and forehead to see if he's better. She nodded and went to the kitchen taking out some cereal out poured it on a cup and started eating it like that. She took a seat next to Rafael and looked out the window smiling.
     
  15. Rafael stirred in his bed and smelled the dried blood that had once soaked his bed and opened his brown eyes to see Milagros looking elsewhere smiling. Her smile gave him a warm feeling that slowly worked its way from his stomach to his chest. It had reminded him of the times when he would wake up to the meldious tune of his wife and gigglins of his daughter.

    He slowly sat up in the bed wincing as the bandaged bullet wounds in his body throbbed. When he got up he had realized that he only worde the wrapped up bandages that were on his torso. She had cared for him this much when he been resting the entire time? The thought lingered in his mind as he looked at her silently and heard the morning bustlings of the town. He sluggishly moved his feet over the edge of the soft bed and got up. He smelled of blood and dust and walked, holding his side (which had the deepest bullet wound) pressed a weak hand on the white wall and dragged his feet and continued onward.

    He didn't like to feel vulnerable like this, it made him feel like he was someone's baby. He knew that Milagros had good intentions for his well-being but he pushed out all other thoughts of this and his cold expression returned to his face. He looked over his shoulder and the three hanging bangs got in his eyes and he cleared his throat and said, "Buenos Dias..."

    "Why can't I say thank you?"
     
  16. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Milagros looked at Rafael her eyes locked into his. She knew something was on his mind but what? "I see you can walk now. How are you feeling?" Milagros walked to him a put one hand on his good shoulder. "While you were sleeping I went and ordered some tamales it's in the kitchen would you like some? it also has some mole if you want some spice in it." Milagros forgetting that her hand was on his shoulder. "I wish I was there to help you...." Milagros looked away and signed and took out a cigarette from her pocket. "You should take a shower because smell really bad.." Just be careful not to move a lot or well your wound might open. Okay?" she said smiling softly.
     
  17. Rafael nodded silently to Milagros and continued his hard struggle to the bathroom. He truly was grateful to her helping him out in his time of great need but he would never go so far as to verbally thank her, he believed that his silent gesture of thanks was good enough for her. As he opened the door to the white-walled bathroom he slowly and painfully pulled off his jacket and made the long process of stripping down to nothing at all. He turned to the left to see the large clear mirror reflect an injured and dirty Rafael and he turned up his nose when the harsh stench of blood found its way into his nose.

    As he stepped into the shower and drew the drapes over he slowly undid the bandages on his body and turned on the water and adjusted the shower head so that the flow of the water would be gentle on his wounded body. But as he closed his eyes he saw the images of his wife and little girl bleeding in his arms. Ignoring his wounds he slammed his knees on the wet floor of the tub and drew himself into a pathetic fetal postion and began to weep softly, his voice inaudible due to the rush of water and outside noise.
     

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