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Crystal Heart

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Gods_Princess, Feb 2, 2012.

  1. Gods_Princess

    Gods_Princess New Member

    A heart is like a crystal
    As fragile as can be
    People seem to miss it
    But they can barely see
    All the things
    Trapped inside
    But Now it's broken
    Shards are lost
    They never understood the cost
    But now there's nothin' they can't see
    We try so hard
    To hide the pain
    We think that all is lost
    We look at them,
    Feel dead inside
    Loss for what do
    Never lookin to the Cross
    Content with solitude
    The light reaches the Dark place
    We can not but be moved
    He picks up the pieces
    We never thought we'd find
    Puts them back together
    Givin' us our peace of mind.
     
    Last edited: Feb 20, 2012
  2. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    You misspelled hide. You said hid instead of hide. Otherwise, good poetry. :D
     
  3. Angel

    Angel Lion Heart Staff Member Administrator

    I dont get the part about "they"seem to miss it but they can barely see. Then you say "they can't understand the cost now their is nothing "they" can't see. It sounds contradicting.
     
  4. Gods_Princess

    Gods_Princess New Member

    Wow good question um gotta think. People don't see what others truly want or desire And when they win someone else's heart they usually see the cost of the damage after they break it for there's little or nothing that's hidden
     
    Last edited: Feb 20, 2012
  5. Angel

    Angel Lion Heart Staff Member Administrator

    Okay, I love questioning poems so....
    Which one is more important all the things trapped inside the heart or the shards?
     
  6. Gods_Princess

    Gods_Princess New Member

    Ohh h'm the shards because when reassembled perfectly there's less pain then what there was before and it gives a new start
     
    Last edited: Feb 20, 2012
  7. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I can actually understand this poetry from a Spiritual point of view; XD But my observation of the poem may be different from Mrs. Gods_Princess since she is the one who wrote it.:

    Since the heart is precious like a gem (crystal), it needs special care. It is like a young child or a doe, a special talent or a person who will do great in life. However, a lot of people in the world overlook this and end up messing up the foundation that carries in itself so much power to change anything. It is once we end up messing up that we end up feeling real bad and so we try so much to do anything to cover it up or put a shield up when "We never look up to the Cross" (In other words, Jesus Christ I am assuming). The Lord will then come in when we almost lost all hope and he heals what was lost and broken, becoming better than what it was before.

    To me, I thought that what was more important was the foundation, the heart because that is what holds the special power that MUST be taken care of until the time is right to use it.
     
  8. Gods_Princess

    Gods_Princess New Member

    Summnoner you have incredible insight.
     

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