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Kingdom Hearts: Fates Reversed

Discussion in 'OOC and Sign Up' started by TheKnightofAwesome, Mar 28, 2012.

  1. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    @Ventus: Looking good, glad to be able to RP with you again! So a few quick questions. One: the pic you used seems to be a bit big, and took out some of the text, which is a little bothersome to me. Just wondering if you could change that perhaps? also, your character: you intend for him to be an ally, yes? Just wondering, cuz "the boy with a terrible fate" seemed a little vague. I'm interested in the changing of the eye color that you mentioned, I couldn't tell if you were being un-descriptive on purpose, or if I missed something due to cut off text. Over all, I'm intrigued and want to see where you plan to go with this. But if you could shrink the pic a bit so that i can read the full app XD

    @Sho: AARRGH! You don't have to make things difficult like this. I told you why i wasn't happy with the app, and gave valid reasons why I wanted it changed. Just because I wanted certain things doesn't mean the app has to be long. I was looking for something different than what you were giving me, and I told you why I didn't think your app was going to work. In your second attempt you kept some things in your app that I had said I didn't like, and insisted on continuing to use.

    Your motivation is on the right track, and you gave me a real name this time, so I'm inclined to give you another go to finally perfect it. Heck, I told you that if you had questions or concerns to PM me and I'd give any help you wanted. However, i'm not going to RP with someone who is going to be angry everytime I disagree with them, as maker of the RP I hold the right to deem if an idea is good or not and your first two tries didn't meet my standards, and that's not a question of length, but a matter of content.

    If you need to, make a separate post to give me his motivation and backstory and I'll take it all in with your other app posts, that way you can maximize your characters. No need to make a name thing or whatever, all i need is a full backstory about why he hates darkness and where he is, and what he plans and yada yada yada. again PM me if you want and or need help, I'll give any advice you need.
     
  2. Taboo Sho

    Taboo Sho The Math Emperor Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I edited that... I'm sorry knight.

    Motivation: Shio hates the darkness. He has ever since it ruined his life. When he was 7 his parents were consumed by darkness and his brother was nearly consumed as well. Even though he managed to save his younger brother he was still devastated by the loss of his parents. As Shio grew older that devastation began to change to hatred, and as a direct result, it affected how he treated his brother. This hatred grew constantly but he fought the need for revenge, he had to so he could protect his brother. Finally after 10 years of fighting, Shio was consumed by his hatred, however, the desire to protect his brother remained, causing him to embrace the light. He became The Holy Tyrant, and vowed to destroy any who had darkness in them, because he believed only one thing: It was the only way to protect his brother.
     
  3. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Ok... much better. Accepted. I'll want to talk to you privately about the relationship between Shio and Domynek.
     
  4. Taboo Sho

    Taboo Sho The Math Emperor Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Shoot me a pm then ^^
     
  5. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Ok, we're almost set to go. RP will start off when I've heard back from Roxion and Ventus about their characters.


    anyway, cards on the table: I got the idea that maybe I might convert the plot of this RP into a fanfic later on down the road. Anybody mind if I use their characters when I do this? I would give you credit for making the characters and all, but if you don't want me too I wont use them.
     
  6. Taboo Sho

    Taboo Sho The Math Emperor Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Fuck yeah! Shio is totally up 4 that!(OH GOD I'm becoming an rp character Dx)
     
  7. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I was being vague on purpose, lol. He is an ally.and I'm sorry about the picture. It's so big I can't even edit the post!

    Name: Dustin (Dusty or Dust)
    Age: 16
    Role: The boy with a terrible fate.
    Bio: Dusty is a boy from Destiny Islands, who dreams of exploring the worlds and becoming as strong as his father, Richard. This man has fought for the light, fighting in a guild called the Knight's Order. It was established in the Enchanted Dominion to fight imbalance after the world was almost destroyed by Maleficent's overuse of heartless on the world. She was defeated by Dusty's father. This was 20 years ago and now at the age of 40, Richard now looks down on his son, Dusty to take up a sword and fight with the Order. Richard Olsen is a strong figurehead within the Islands and the pressure has been put into Dusty's shoulders. However, Dusty has a very big issue he has to face; the darkness. Within the last few months, he has noticed strange happenings with his body. From time to time, black gases leave his hands and in the mirror, he notices his eyes turning completely yellow. Was he turning into something the Islands naturally hate? Within him lies the powers of both light and darkness. Which one is he destined to choose and will he be able to handle the imbalances within himself?
    Personality: Dustin is very critical of himself because of the big shadow he has to fill of his father. He feels like he has to support the Islands like he does and he trains almost every day. He is determined to be a Knight and does not leave himself much time for friends. He sometimes gets panic attacks when he thinks of the darkness inside him. He often gets nightmares of becoming a heartless. If something freaks him out, he can't let it go for a very long time.
    Appearance: [​IMG]
     
    Last edited: Apr 4, 2012
  8. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Ok, save for the bit about Malificent you're Accepted. This is an AU so none of the KH characters existed in this universe. But seeing as Malificent is a Disney character I'll let her slide.

    Speaking of which, any particular worlds you guys would like to visit? I'll be initiating world changes, but I'm always open for suggestions.
     
  9. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Treasure Planet, The Incredibles, American Dragon (lol, childhood), Enchanted Dominion, Traverse Town, Destiny Islands.
     
  10. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Noted. I think the starting world will be Twilight Town, seeing as all three Keyblade wielders have chosen that world as their home.

    Depending on what happens the second world will probably be Radiant Garden or Traverse Town, but this could very easily change.

    Ok all that's left is Roxion to finish his last character and we're good to go, I'm more inclined to hold up for him seeing as his villain will meet the heroes before Sho's character. but the RP will be up by the end of the week even if he doesn't get back to me.

    So Ventus (and everyone else for that matter) do you have a problem if I use your guy for my (possibly happening) fanfic based off of this RP? I'd give you credit for creating him, or I just wont use him if you say no, but I'd really like to reuse this plot for a fanfic if I could.
     
  11. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Let's talk on Skype, Knight!
     
  12. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Well i would, but my computer is being stupid. Skype isn't working at the moment -_- *rages at faulty technology*
     
  13. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    ): Come on, man! I'm in the mood for a random conversation and maybe RP chat right now.
     
  14. Roxion

    Roxion New Member

    finished the second in command, ready to go :)
     
  15. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    @Roxion: Great, This will be interesting. Just as long as you know that being equal in strength to Domynek will mean matches will usually end in a stalemate, or one being defeated but not seriously injured. Neither should be able to kill the other. This will make the Keybladers and the Purehearts the deciding factor of the battle should our two characters cross swords.

    Well with that done, I'll get to work on the opening post. I'll let everyone know when it's up. May take a bit though, hopefully it will be here by the end of the day.
     
  16. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Yes I know double post, but I just posted the RP. post whenever you can but once you post the first time know that that will be your place in the posting order.

    It's just a way to keep the story from being jumbled up.
     
  17. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    Hey knight can I edit my character...
     
  18. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Umm sure, I'll just need to see it before you start posting.
     
  19. Taboo Sho

    Taboo Sho The Math Emperor Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    ... Wow. This is upsetting. 3 weeks without a post?
     
  20. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Yeah. I'm thinking this is dead....so I've started the fanfiction version to keep the story alive.
     

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