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Just some work of mine -critique requested-

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by Kelranox, May 18, 2012.

  1. May 18, 2012 #1
    Kelranox

    Kelranox New Member

    These aren't -all- of the pieces I've created, just an handful. Understand that being an arsehole =/= critiquing.

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  2. May 18, 2012 #2
    Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

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    I like this one a lot. I like the lighting and the black and white really works well.

    The first one is okay, too. I don't care for the black and white part so much, but I like the colors on the left.

    The Yuna tag is also decent. There's maybe a little too much smudging overtop the render for my liking, but the colors look nice and I especially like the way the background looks on the left side of the tag.

    The second tag is okay but a little boring, if I'm being honest. There's not really much that you did to the image, or so it appears to me. I do like the little circle bit on the right side- the colors are very soft and pretty.

    The fourth and fifth raise the same concerns with me- there's kind of a lot going on, and especially in the fifth tag, it doesn't seem all that coherent.

    The sixth is the only one that I really don't like. I can't tell what's going on and the coloring is kind of icky.

    The large piece kind of reminds me of an old photograph, so that's cool. I'd like to see more depth and maybe some variants to the splatter brush. I dunno, all of the splatters look similiar and it doesn't draw my eye. I like the text you used here.

    So yeah. I'd like to see more of your work when you get the chance.
     
  3. May 21, 2012 #3
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    First Pic: I like the color more so than the black and white counterpart, especially since the sparks that is coming from the gun shows more of the explosion and expresses the picture more. At least that is how I see it.

    Second: Meh... not so interested in the "Timber Tykes". I can see that you wanted the girl to be the main attraction but I do believe that the circles can be left out.

    Third: Oh man! I love Yuna. I wonder if you can do an Aerith too. But anyways... it is a bit small but besides that, I do like the effects that you have around Yuna... they look like feathers to me since you have the picture small.

    Fourth: I guess the reason why Kitty/Toph said that there is a lot going on in this one is mainly because of the big, black metals that you have stemming from the man.

    Fifth: I like the blue liquid that you have and I like the lightning. Still, I think Kitty might find something wrong with this one.

    Sixth: DX I don't know what is going on. Looks like brown goo all over in a deserted place.

    Seventh: :O WHAT A BIG PICTURE YOU HAVE!! I want to see more on it though.

    Eighth: ^^ I love the pretty bunny with lights coming from its eyes and mouth... but beside that, I also like the black background. They look like leaves.
     
  4. Jul 8, 2012 #4
    Kelranox

    Kelranox New Member

    Thanks. I've been meaning to work deadmau5 into a sig for a while and I'm glad some people like it.

    I'm generally indecisive, so that's the product.

    Probably my oldest sig in this list. And I'm garbage at smudging, which is evident here.

    For the Walshy sig, I guess I was going for some kind machinization. Not really sure, but I still dig the lighting.

    The Ryu sig was originally bigger, but I felt the right side was too barren, so I cut it down.

    That would be GLaDOS being destroyed, along with the background. Think of it like a ki blast obliterating everything, or at least that's how I treated it. The yellow can be offputting but I was trying to play off of the glow from the eye.

    I'm really handicapped with large pieces, because I tend to sling effects all over the place due to how broad everything is. I probably should have made a clipping mask along with some of those splatters.

    Most people tend to prefer that one, since the fire can actually be appreciated.

    Admittedly, this one was a request. Their only request was the text and desaturating all of the rabbits while leaving everything in the middle alone. So, I thought to spruce it up as best I could.

    In that same style? I dunno, I could give it a shot. I haven't smudged in ages and even then, I was never really good.

    Heh, again..transformer type thing. He's more than a man or something? I dunno.

    'S a C4D, though looking back at it I could have blended it better.

    That would be GLaDOS being destroyed, along with the background. Think of it like a ki blast obliterating everything, or at least that's how I treated it. The yellow can be offputting but I was trying to play off of the glow from the eye.

    I couldn't lasso her out of the picture, so I figured I'd edit the entire stock. As you can see, I'm generally better with smaller pieces.

    Heh..eh.i..it's..it's a mouse. Deadmau5, actually.
     

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