Roxion

Umm . . . how much did you and/or do you like Mayanna?

Hey Griffin . . . I gotta ask you something.

How long is the break anyway?

I don't know why?

No, sorry, what was it?

I've been having a rapetastic day due. Butcha's test was pwn3d.

What's up man?

http://kh-3.net/forums/group.php?groupid=154

Not an av. This is a link to one of KHP's social groups that I've created.

Jeantress looked at Siah not with a look of concern but a look of confusion, "Siah? what's gotten into you? what's wrong?" she stepped back a bit and prepared to summon a reflect wall if it was needed.

Hey Roxion. The one's that I put in bold either needs a period or needs to be capitalized in your last post in Neo Organization. Also, you need either six sentences or three lines in order for your roleplay post to count. Please edit this so you won't get yelled at by anyone or those higher than me. Just here to help you redo your rp errors.

Aha, good. Gotta pay attention to the mass posts of Reo in the future, eh?

Erm? It clearly says that the four of the Nobodies were swept away to TWTNW.

"They seemed like a dark looming cloud but as they got within an inch of clawing them, black, white, and gray tendrils shot out and destroyed them. The world began to be covered with these tendrils and the four Nobodies were taken away and swooped back to The World That Never Was..."

That was from Reo's last post. The Nobodies are now at The World That Never Was, not in Twilight Town. That's why you'll need to edit your post, because no one is anymore there.

Hey, one tip on the Neo RP. As Reo said, the four Nobodies in Twilight Town were transferred to TWTNW. So edit your post before someone says of it. 'cause you can't be talking to anyone in Twilight Town when there's no one there, eh? ;)

Don't worry, you've got good enough english to roleplay, just keep it up with the play. Just remember to read all of the posts so you know what's happening.

Upon being asked about friends, Jeantress looked away from Siah, and said in a very angry tone, "when i was a human, all those people i knew can go to hell," she looked at her fellow members and continued in a calmer tone, "but i guess some of YOU guys are alright."

First off, you need to replace some of those commas with periods, or it'll be a run on sentence. That comma that I underlined needs to be taken out. The commas & letters I've bolded needs to be either capitalized or needs periods. Please go back & make those few errors. Thanks.

Hey Roxion hows it going?