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I want your opinions.

Discussion in 'Archive' started by TheKnightofAwesome, Oct 3, 2011.

  1. Oct 3, 2011 #1
    TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼

    So I'm a senior in High School this year and I want to choose a path that I best fit into. I REALLY want to go into writing when i grow up, so from those of you that i have RPed with or have read my story going in the Traditional Showcase (Sugarloaf) please tell me what you think of my writing style.

    Where do you think i lack, or what are my strong suits. Please be honest, I want to know if people enjoy my writing.
     
  2. Oct 3, 2011 #2
    Corbenik_979

    Corbenik_979 Member

    Well im not much of a critic nor do i like hurting feelings but even if i put that aside i still think your pretty good at writing
     
  3. Oct 16, 2011 #3
    DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    Knight I think your RP setups are the gratest...your story's have alot of promise aswell(Way more then mine do) but even with all that theres no garentie that you would make a liveing writeing, even puting that aside I am one who belives in people doing what they love in life...if you want to go and be a writer I say let nothing stand in your way, fight what ever battles you have to to make your dream a reality, no matter what you can always be who you want to be, don't let others stand in your way, some people say that its the suit that makes the man but their wrong, its the other way around completly, no matter what others tell you never think or tell yourself any diffrent because then you will always doubt yourself, the only thing you need to do is fight for what you belive in, I saport you 100%.
     
  4. Oct 16, 2011 #4
    Suriel

    Suriel New Member

    Well, If you want me to be honest....
    You have good grammar in general and your story seems well described. As for the lacking part, can't say much just a little repetitive in some parts but other than that nothing more. If that's your dream just go for it, though it would be better if you find a job just to ensure the economic part before doing it. You have the potencial.
     
  5. Oct 16, 2011 #5
    DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    ...Suriel did you not read my post above...shame on you I saprot my freind 100% and you try to bring him down...
     
  6. Oct 16, 2011 #6
    Suriel

    Suriel New Member

    Bring him down? Please explain because i don't understand you.
     
  7. Oct 16, 2011 #7
    DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    ... ... ...I...NO...LIKE...YOU...RIGHT...NOW...is that spusific enough for you? I do my best to chear on my friend becuase I belive in people makeing their dreams come true and you shut him down by saying "it would be better if you find a job just to ensure the economic part before doing it"? I am not trying to get pissed right now but come on give the guy credit and actualy encourge him instead of shuting him down...
     
  8. Oct 16, 2011 #8
    Suriel

    Suriel New Member

    Well I'm being sincere if you have a problem with that i don't care and i couldn't care less if you like me or not. It's nice of you to support him but don't get involved in another persons comment just because "you don't like it". And i did support him but you decided to ignore all the entire paragraph just to annoy the hell out of me. Besides the economic part IS positive if you didn't notice either.
     
  9. Oct 16, 2011 #9
    Corbenik_979

    Corbenik_979 Member

    I LIKE BOTH OF YOU!!!!! Besises the comment wasnt all that bad. I support him too 100%
     
  10. Oct 16, 2011 #10
    DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    well thats two-aginst-one right now then...and thank you Corbenik...do you mind if I call you Core?
     
  11. Oct 16, 2011 #11
    Corbenik_979

    Corbenik_979 Member

    not a bit. So your nickname is trio right?
     
  12. Oct 16, 2011 #12
    DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    yes it is and its all three of us that saport him 100%...I just sorted that out.
     
  13. Oct 16, 2011 #13
    TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼

    Thank you all, ^_^ even you Suriel. I think you're right, no one become a novelist right out of the gate. I plan to be a writer for a company or paper or magazine to pay the bills and write stories in my spare time. until i get them published and can make money off of that.

    Trio: the fact that you have my back 100% just made my day. I feel more confident that no one has given me too many bad reviews other than my repetitiveness. I have also found this to be a problem and I'm working on it now in my Creative Writing course for school. Also Trio: I don't like how you shot down Suriel for telling me like it is. I'm glad you have my back, but I asked for honesty and Suriel gave it to me.

    again thank you all for your thoughts, i will work harder on my writing to become the best i can be.
     
  14. Oct 16, 2011 #14
    DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    yea about that...Suriel, I am truly sorry for that...and yes knight we worked it out with eachother...
     
  15. Oct 16, 2011 #15
    Suriel

    Suriel New Member

    No problem and yeah we already worked it out. Good luck Knight and I'm sure you will achieve it.
     

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