Khplanet college- where murder can happen(based off of the fourms)

Beginning of Murders(chapter 1)
In a college dorm 2 kids were sitting together enjoying themselves to there hearts content watching a rated R movie called Funny People. One was named Destiny and another was named Alex both were enjoying themselves easily. Alex stood up and changed the channel to Cnn to watch local news about the killer on the loose but lets recap about what happened before then and what started these murders on campus. ​

It was Febuary 25, 2017 a day of relaxion for the rich kids going to KHPlanet college for the rich. There they had a swimming pool, a gun range, a tennis court, and a golf course as well as a big school to. Destiny and her friend Zol were playing in the pool when he teacher Hope told them that the mouring class sechedule has ended and they were free to do what they want, Destiny blushed a little and said " Well i'm going to get dressed then go to the tennis court kay Zol" Destiny said getting out of the pool and walking towards her dormroom. Inside of Destiny's room was pictures of games she has played and her bed and comple other things as well, she went towards her suitcase and pulled out some blue and gray shoes, a blue skirt, and a pink and blue top. She quckly put on her cloths and headed towards Alex's dorm to get him up since he was in the same class as her and walked towards the boy's section of the dorms and walked in there to see that his dorm room door was open and she walked in. Alex was in the shower when he heard her come in and he said "I'm in the shower Destiny come back in 10 minutes" Alex said grooming his hair with shampoo and washing it and Destiny walked out and headed towards the tennis court. When she got there the place was crowded and packed full of people waiting so she went back to her dorm and relaxed untill she heard a scream in the distance.​

Zol went into Dog1238 room to drag him out and it was easy considering the fact he was already alsleep and did not wake up till he found himself on a target pole in the gun range, two pistols aiming at him. "What the hell is that" He said a little muffled because of the tape on his mouth. "What does it look like i'm killing you with 2 pistols idiot" Zol said aiming the pistols at his nuts and shot bullets at it and made him scream out in terror, then he shot his heart. When people heard the screams of pain and terror they came down to the gun range and saw Dog's corspe on the pole, blood still coming out of his heart. Police officals came in an hour talking to princpal Prodigy about the crime scence and who was out of their room at the time of the murder and decided to leave seeing no reason to be here after 2 hours of investaging. ​

(Author's note- I really want people to help make this better and a little bit more exciting and i'm finshing it there because i don't want to bore you to death) ​

 

Thank you i took your advice. Though if people want me to take characters in i'll be glad to and i thought more people would read this

 

seems good and reduces spam chapter 2 will be posted soon.Last call for anyone who wants a character in will post it here and let me decide if i will use it don't bore me to death with details i jut want more characters in this story because i have a devious plot that goes along with the next chapters