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Kingdom Hearts: Hearts of the Ancestors

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  1. Noir

    Noir

    Hello, guys, this is my first fan Kingdom Hearts Story, it is about 4 kids who discover the hearts of their ancestors and solve the mystery.
    THE CAST:
    Party:
    Gaia
    14 Years Old
    Weapon: Keyblade (1)
    Signature Move: Quake
    Appeareance: Hair - Same as Roxas, but brown. Body color - White. Clothes - Green and White Shirt, black pants, Green Necklace and brown Eyes
    Ancestor: Sora

    Erus:
    15 Years Old
    Weapon: Keyblades (2)
    Signature Move: Energy Charger
    Appeareance: Hair - Same as Riku. Body color - White. Clothes - Black with blue flames Shirt, white pants, Blue Necklace and blue Eyes
    Ancestor: Riku

    Lilium:
    14 Years Old
    Weapon: Keyblade (1)
    Signature Move: Sliding Rose
    Appeareance: Hair - Same as Kairi, but pink. Body color - White. Clothes - Pink with white streams to up Shirt, white shorts, Pink Necklace and brown Eyes
    Ancestor: Kairi

    Sophos
    16 Years Old
    Weapon: Flying Keyblade (1)
    Signature Move: Anger's Intelligence
    Appeareance: Hair - Same as Ansem, but short. Body color - White. Clothes - Black Shirt, black pants, Red Necklace and black Eyes
    Ancestor: Ansem the Wise

    STORY:
    4 kids, Gaia, Erus, Lilium and Sophos sat on a tree. They saw darkness was on the outside world, entering their home world and they must save the world from darkness. Then a light appeared behind them.

    "Hear me children. You are needed to save the world." the Light said.
    "Who is that?...Gah!" Sophos said as he was suprised.
    "Who are you?" Erus said.
    "I am nothing. I am a light, to tell you that the darkness is destroying the other worlds. I will give you weapons." the Light said then it summoned 5 keyblades. Erus took the 2 keyblades and the others took them too.
    "Woah.." the children said as they were proud.
    "Save the world from evil." the Light said as it disappeared.
    "Is this an adventure?" Gaia questioned.
    "Yes. This is our journey. We need to do what the Light said to us." Erus said.

    Then their journey begins...
     
    Last edited: Sep 3, 2011
  2. Noir

    Noir

    NEW Characters:
    Enemies:
    Shadows
    Crawler
    Nobodies:
    Destraxios (Nobody of Erus)
    Neutral:
    Sam Flynn
    Quorra
    Kevin Flynn
    Bosses:
    Destraxios (Boss)
    Rinzler (Mini-Game)
    Clu (Boss)
    THE PARTY
    Gaia - Green
    Erus - Blue
    Lilium - Plum
    Sophos - Red

    Space Paranoids
    Now they had a new journey, they first go to Space Paranoids. Then they met Sam..

    "A world full of glowing lights! Awesome!" Sophos said as he was amazed.
    "Although, there's no flowers." Lilium said.
    "Well, guys. Look at us, we're in different clothes." Erus said.
    "Wow, looks like we're glowing." Gaia said.

    Things (Lightcycle) passed in front of them. They always left a wall (Light Ribbon).

    "Those are great! What are they?" Sophos was confused but amazed.
    "They are Lightcycles. Huh?" Gaia said.
    "It's just all and that..This is getting us nowhere." Erus said.
    "Yeah. We should better be moving." Gaia then walked. Then he saw a man walking in the streets.
    "Who's that?" Lilium said.
    "We should find out." Gaia replied.
    "Who are you?" Erus said.
    "I am Sam. Nice to meet you, welcome to Space Paranoids." Sam said.
    "Nice to meet you too. What do we do?" Lilium said.
    "Well you need to defeat Clu. He is trying to change the world." Sam said.

    A shadow appeared in front of them. The shadow's eyes were blue. It attacked the party.

    "Energy Slash!" Erus said as he charged his weapon.
    Then more shadows appeared. It attacked the whole party.
    "You'll meet your doom! Meteor Attack!" Sophos summoned fast meteors. The shadows instantly disappeared.
    "That's one kick for a customer!" Sophos joyfully said.
    "Good job Sophos. Now we need to keep get going." Erus said.
    "Wait, there's a hooded black thing there. That thing looks dangerous." Sam said.

    Then a memory hits Erus' head. (He was at a castle laying down. Then a stream of darkness came to him and a shadow form of him appeared behind him. It was his Nobody, Destraxios. Then Destraxios walked away through the door. After Destraxios being born, Erus waked up when a Shadow appeared in front of him. Erus took a sharp stick in his pocket. He throwed it away to the Shadow and he ran away.) Then Erus waked up.
    "Hey, Erus?" Gaia said.
    "Agh..This memory. It's true. The black hooded thing was my Nobody, Destraxios. You have a nobody too, but I didn't see him born." Erus said to Gaia.
    "Look, I know my nobody too. He is Aixozene." Gaia said.
    "What are you guys doing? Let's eat dinner." Lilium said to both best friends.
    They ate dinner. Then Erus finished eating. He leaves the tower. He saw a helmeted man (Clu) in the ground.
    "Hello and welcome, user." The man said.
    "Who are you?" Erus said to him.
    "I am Clu." Clu said then his helmet was gone.
    "What are you doing here, Erus? What the? Who's that guy?" Gaia said.
    "He's Clu. He reminds me of a villain." Erus whispered to him.
    "That's what you said." Clu said then his helmet appeared again and throws a disk in them.
    "What the..What a deadly disk!!" Erus said in fear.

    Then the hooded thing appeared in front of Clu. He began to attack him with blue Ethereal Blades. Clu shouts in pain. Clu disappeared and goes to his tower.

    "Hmph. Erus. You remembered me, didn't you?" The hooded thing said.
    "I know you. Destraxios. Why do this?" Erus said.
    "Because I want you to join with me!" Destraxios said.
    "No, I don't want to." Erus said.
    "If you don't want to join, then it's time to meet your death!" Destraxios charged at him and the battle begins.
     
    Last edited: Jul 12, 2011
  3. Noir

    Noir

    NEW Characters:
    Orutorosu - Appeareance: Hair - Same as Axel, but purple. Clothes - Black with yellow stripes Shirt, grey pants, Purple Neckelace and Green Eyes.
    Ancestor: Lea

    The Battle Begins Pt.1

    "Show me what you've got!" Destraxios said then he charged his blue ethereal blades to Erus.

    "Energy...Chaaarger!" Erus shouts then a force of Ki surrounds him and he used his Keyblade, glowing hard. He striked Destraxios in the body, but Destraxios misses it.

    "Ha! Is that all you've got?" Then Destraxios falls to Erus like a blue meteor, and Erus was hitted.

    "What the.." Erus was breathing hard.

    "Giving up, Erus?" Destraxios kicked him. He laughed.

    "Impossible! You can't be strong!" The Ki around Erus was disappearing.

    A mysterious boy appeared in front of them.

    "You'll die, cheater!" The boy said. He charged at Destraxios hardly.

    Destraxios laughed. He regenerated his wound instantly.

    "Impossible!" Erus and the boy said.

    "It was just a scratch." Destraxios said.

    "Who are you?" Erus quickly shouted at the boy.

    "I'm Orutorosu!" Orutorosu shouted.

    Orutorosu stabbed him. Destraxios screams in pain.

    "You'll pay..why.." Destraxios disappeared, but he is still alive.
     
    Last edited: Apr 21, 2011
  4. Noir

    Noir

    NEW PARTY Member!
    Orutorosu - Ancestor: Lea (If you forgot it)
    Age - 14
    The Last Battle of Space Paranoids
    Orutorosu, who's ancestor was Lea, joined the Party to search his ancestor's heart. He was the same age with Gaia, who they become best friends. Erus, who is riding a Lightcycle, goes to Clu's Tower to defeat him once and for all.

    "I'm near..!" Erus shouted.

    "There he is.." Rinzler said.

    "What the?" Erus said.

    "Hello there, user." Rinzler said.

    "Clu?" Erus realized that he was Clu.

    "I'll give you a hint." Rinzler said.

    "Let's play some mini-game!" Erus shouted.

    "Fine." Rinzler said.

    They did a Lightcycle battle. Erus hitted Rinzler instantly with the Light Ribbon.

    "This can't be happening.." Rinzler was knocked unconscious. His helmet was almost broken.

    Erus hurriedly go fast with his Lightcycle. He goes to the top of the tower to see Clu. He finally met him.

    "Why are you late? Have you been waiting?" Clu said to him.

    "I'm not done with you!" Erus shouted.

    "Wait, Erus!" Gaia said and Erus was surprised.

    "Gaia! It's too dangerous! Go!" Erus said.

    "No! I won't lose you again!" Gaia was now having tears.

    "Calm down. Are we finished fighting?" Clu said then he summoned a Crawler. The Crawler was a mecha-worm. It attacked Gaia and Erus with it's laser.

    "That's one big worm..!" Erus shouted.

    "Quake!!" Gaia shouts then a 8.5 earthquake came into the whole tower. Clu was knocked unconscious. He began to scream in pain then he throws a Disc.
    Sophos breaked in the glass like a ninja. He began to use Telekeneis to control his Keyblade with force. The keyblade destroyed the mecha-worm. Then the keyblade charges at Clu. Clu was instantly defeated.

    "Good to see you guys safe." Sophos said.

    "We should go!" The two shouted.

    After a few moments, Sophos, Gaia and Erus gained victory. They return back to Kevin's tower.

    "Who's that woman..?" Erus said.

    "Her name is Quorra." Sam replied.

    "Hi, I'm Quorra. Nice to meet you." Quorra said.

    "Umm..Mr. Kevin, can we go? We've got another mission.." Gaia said.

    "Okay then. Be safe." Kevin said.

    A few moments later.. Orutorosu first flies into a small world called Cocoon. Gaia, Erus, Lilium, Sophos and Orutorosu was late. They met first met Chocobos.
     
  5. Noir

    Noir

    srry the other part will come soon in May 24! XD
     
  6. Noir

    Noir

    Destraxios' appearance will be a blindfolded Erus/Riku!
     
  7. Noir

    Noir

    Kingdom Hearts: Hearts of the Ancestors
    May 24 - NEW Part
    Some new things:
    More weapons, 2 more characters to find and join the party.
    About the weather in the beginning will be seen.
    More fun features coming soon at a big update.
     
  8. Noir

    Noir

    Kingdom Hearts: Hearts of the Ancestors
    SHORT Story
    NEW Characters:
    Marlene the Moogle

    Chocobo Breeding

    "I want the black chocobo one! It's so strong it fits for me!" Sophos said.

    "Look, I'm riding in a chocobo!" Gaia said.

    "Hello, kupo!" a Moogle said.

    "A moogle!" Erus said.

    "My name's Marlene, kupo." Marlene the Moogle said.

    NOTE: Story will continue in May 24 for the long story :NOTE
     
  9. Noir

    Noir

    I would like to make a thread which describes KH: Hearts of the Ancestors Game.

    EDIT - Here's about it. (Fan Fiction)
    Same features with Kingdom Hearts 2 and Kingdom Hearts Birth By Sleep Final Mix
    Release date (Fan Fictional) - 2011
    Might be in Nintendo 3DS, PS3 and PSP
    Playable characters are..
    Gaia
    Erus
    Lilium
    Sophos
    Orutorosu (Unlocked in the New Game Character Selection if Space Paranoids is Complete)
    Syaedo (Unlocked in the New Game Character Selection if Cocoon is Complete)

    Multiplayer..
    Aixozene
    Marlene the Moogle (Healer)
    Destraxios

    WILL EDIT THIS IF THERE IS NEWS FOR MY FAN-FICTIONAL GAME
     
    Last edited: Aug 12, 2011
  10. Noir

    Noir

    Here we go, the 5th part is here!
    This part has no battles first, only just exploring.

    NEW Characters:
    From the Pokemon world:
    Pikachu

    From the Final Fantasy XIII world:
    The Chocobo Chick
    Sazh

    Exploring Planet Cocoon!
    Weather: Night - Cloudy

    "Hmm.. Let's try exploring this world." Erus said.

    "I think it's a good idea.." Gaia said.

    All of the chocobos looked at the heroes as they left. Two each of the heroes seperate to explore the world, except for Orutorosu, who joined Gaia and Erus.

    "I'm coming with you, Gaia and Erus." Orutorosu said.

    "Alright." Gaia said.

    They see big buildings, and more things. So Gaia, Erus and Sophos checked everything while Lilium and Sophos touch familiar plants.

    "Those are beautiful plants, especially the flowers!" Lilium said.

    "I know..except that plant looks dangerous, over there." Sophos said.

    "It's thorny!.." Lilium said.

    "Like a combination of a pine tree and a cactus. It's 2x larger than a normal pine tree." Sophos said as he described it.

    A chocobo chick appeared in front of Erus. Then a man called Sazh follows the chick.

    "Who are you? Hm?" Sazh said.

    "I'm Gaia." Gaia said.

    "I'm Gaia, this one is Orutorosu." Erus said.

    "Yeah, I'm Orutorosu." Orutorosu said.

    "Hmm, do you boys wanna rest?" Sazh said.

    "Sure!" the young heroes said.

    While Gaia, Erus, Orutorosu and Sazh rest, Lilium and Sophos just rest in a building.

    After the heroes rest, they said the world was very beautiful.. and they will work as a team together.

    To be continued
     
    Last edited: Jun 3, 2011
  11. Noir

    Noir

    The next part will be in June 4.. (Moved due to no ideas)
     
    Last edited: Jun 3, 2011
  12. Noir

    Noir

    The game will be in the Kingdom Hearts Fan Wiki!
     
    Last edited: Jun 3, 2011
  13. Noir

    Noir

    Lightning, the protagonist of Final Fantasy XIII, will be appeared in the next part.
    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    No new characters...

    A Pokemon appeared!
    Weather: Morning - A little sunny

    "Wonder if there's more creatures out there.." Orutorosu said.
    "Uhh, hey, would you like a candy?" Gaia said to him.
    "Sure! Hope it's delicious.." Orutorosu happily said.
    "Is it...Good?" Gaia said.
    "Hmmm...yeah." Orutorosu replied.
    "You know, it looks safe here." Gaia said.
    "Well, there's monsters out there." Erus said.
    "Huh? Oh well." Gaia said.
    "Well, we didn't fight any danger for 1 day, did we?" Orutorosu said.
    "Yeah." Gaia and Erus said.
    "Pika-pika pi?" A creature said.
    "Wait, what's that mouse?!" Orutorosu questioned.
    "It's a Pokemon." Erus answered.
    "And it's cute! Lemme follow it!" Gaia said.
    "Pika-pika-pika..." Pikachu said.
    "Hmm! It's cuddly." Gaia said.
    "Pika....PIKACHU!!!" Pikachu said and shocks Gaia.
    "Wahh..." Gaia said as he is hitted by Pikachu's Thunderbolt.
    "Cmon, let's go explore again. You can bring that creature." Erus said to Gaia.
    "Okay." Gaia said.
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    A new party member will be appeared in the next part, finally! :D
     
    Last edited: Jun 6, 2011
  14. Noir

    Noir

    Hey. This will be the new character.
    Munlaiteu Syaedo is his name meaning Moonlight Shadow.
    His profile (from the My Future Characters (Don't touch.) Thread.) :
    Name: Munlaiteu Syaedo
    Age: Unknown (~15)
    Race: Demon
    Ancestor: (fan-made Character) Seon Syaedo
    Weapon: Spear-like keyblade.
    Abilities: He can disappear easily by using a Datura flower.. He can use Smite on tough enemies and when he uses Smite, you exploded like by a Nuclear Bomb.
    Physical Description: He looks like a fusion of Riku and Goku. He also has two horns, the right horn is laying down and the left horn stands.
    Personality: A little shy, kind but sad but when he fears, he pretends to be happy. He is also caring but strong enough to protect the Demon World and Earth. He trusts his friends (Especially Erus), families and loved-ones.
    History: Munlaiteu Syaedo, always called Syaedo, is a keyblade wielder from the Demon World. He doesn't like to show in the public. He wants to do something to protect the innocent things because he wants to live, not to die. He will be always there for his loved ones. He also doesn't like being friends from not-interesting strangers. Then he grows up as he gets kinder. His wish granted by the legendary Keyblade.
     
    Last edited: Jul 12, 2011
  15. Noir

    Noir

    Finally, here goes the next part!
    NEW Party Member, yesh!

    A New Unity!
    Weather: Night - Winter beginning

    "Pika-pika!" Pikachu said.
    "What the..MONSTER?" Orutorosu was feared.
    The monster roared at them.
    "Pika..pika...CHU!!" Pikachu used Thundershock at the enemy.
    The monster just had a scratch. The monster brings out it's claws and stuns Gaia.
    "Ugh..." Gaia said as he was stunned.
    "GIVE ME FOOD!!" The monster roared out.
    "Guys, hit that blue crystal on his chest!* Erus shouted out.
    "Take this!" Orutorosu breaks the blue crystal on the Monster's chest with rushing.
    The monster disappeared.
    "Ha.." A mysterious young Demon said.
    "Hey, that guy looks like a Demon!" Orutorosu commented.
    "So you are the warriors traveling each world in danger...That interests me as well." The young Demon said.
    "You have the same attitude to be quiet a bit?" Erus said.
    "Correct.. So, my name is Syaedo. I am a young Demon from the Demon World." Syaedo said.
    "Your name means Moonlight Shadow?"
    "Yes.. My name means Moonlight Shadow.. How did you know my full name, Munlaiteu Syaedo?" Syaedo questioned.
    "Wha..what happend..Wah.. Who's that person? Demon? Human? Warrior? Whatever.." Gaia questioned.
    "His name is Syaedo.. and Syaedo, I know your name because I can read everyone's minds." Erus replied to both of them.
    "Oh..I could join you, but can you give the Crystal to me over there?" Syaedo said.
    Gaia, Orutorosu and Erus did what he said. They gave the crystal to Syaedo.
    "Thanks.." Syaedo said.
    "Demon, are you?" A mysterious woman said.
    "Why are there so many people coming to us?" Erus said.
    "Pikachu?" Pikachu waked up.
    "Hey, Pikachu!" Gaia was proud that Pikachu waked up.
    "Well, my name is Lightning..I'll be leaving, I'll meet you guys again." Lightning said and she left.
    "She's beautiful.." Syaedo said.
    "Hope I can introduce Pikachu to Sophos!" Gaia said.
    "Let's go guys." Erus said to them.
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Part 8 will come soon and Syaedo will use his weapon!
     
    Last edited: Jul 12, 2011
  16. Noir

    Noir

    It is here.
    Sophos and Lilium are back.

    Shine, little light!
    Weather: Dawn - Winter

    "Who are those?" Syaedo said.
    "It's Sophos and Lilium! They're back!" Gaia said happily.
    "Hey guys! Who's that guy? Sophos questioned.
    "I'm Syaedo.." Syaedo replied.
    "Ha, cool!" Sophos said.
    "Ugh, dammit.." Syaedo said angrily and he summon his weapon, the Legendary Dragon Spear that looks like a keyblade. He shoots it at the Big Tree.
    "Wha, what are you doing..?!" Lilium was scared.
    "Don't you dare say questions!!" The Darkness inside him said.
    "Dang, he has.." Erus was confused.
    "We have to get outta here!" Orutorosu shouted out.
    "There's no running away, idiot!" A mysterious Nobody appeared.
    "Ugh... that guy... controlling and confusing me?...D...Die!" Syaedo charged at the Nobody.
    "Ugh, get out of here you people! Lightning jumps in.
    "Didn't you remember me, Gaia?! My name is Aixozene! You are my original persona; my somebody! I would wished to appear when you are at that world!" Aixozene shouted.
    "Wha..." Gaia is feared.

    To be continued...
     
  17. Noir

    Noir

    The battle is here!

    The Party and Lightning vs. Aixozene!
    Weather: Morning - Winter

    "You; I know you! You are Aixozene, my nobody! Give up!" Gaia shouted.
    "You are mess, I will clean these messes!" Aixozene said.
    "We must let him go away!" Syaedo then hits his stomach with his weapon.
    "Agh... this is gonna hurt a lot..." Aixozene was hurt bad.
    "Flowers will shine!" Lilium charges at Aixozene. Aixozene blocked the attack.
    "Grr..." Aixozene gets mad.
    "Take this." Lightning attacks Aixozene.
    "Why do you always hurt me?" Aixozene said.
    "It's a battle, idiot!" Sophos replied.
    "It's a battle... then die!" Aixozene appears behind them. He attacks them rapidly.
    "Grrmph.." Erus scoffs.
    "Pika-chu!" Pikachu said.
    "Let's get those puppies be beated up!" Sazh arrives at a good time.
    "Don't care...!!!" Aixozene disappears with a black smoke.
    "Is that all he got..." Syaedo said quietly.
    "Let's go now." Erus said. Then they fly up now to a mysterious planet...

    TO BE Continued...
     
  18. Noir

    Noir

    This is a fan-fiction world with fan-fiction characters and this world is called "Epolayusa".

    A Dark World with One Shining Light!
    Weather: Endless Night - Cloudy

    The team arrives on a dark planet. They don't know what's wrong with the sky.

    "This planet has an endless Night.. but what's wrong far over there?" Erus said.
    "I heard that this planet has a cold heart. There are some life forms somewhere in this planet." Syaedo replied.
    "Whew. What a choice..." Gaia said.
    A cloaked humanoid Heartless fused with an Unversed appeared. It was never seen.
    "Grrrr..." The mysterious monster roared out.
    "Come on, let's fight that thing, now!" Syaedo shouted.
    "Okay!" Sophos charged at the monster.

    The monster blocked every attacks the party did. The monster brings a explosion and it escaped quick.

    "Man, that fiend will be toast when it comes again!" Sophos shouted.
    "We will have a chance." Syaedo and Erus said.
    "What a shame this was...." Lilium said.

    TO BE CONTINUED
     
  19. Noir

    Noir

    Here we go..~

    Chapter 3 (Epolayusa)
    Companions of a Demon and meeting Aixozene!
    Weather: Endless Night - Clear

    "Hey, I've forgot to introduce my companion. It's a snowy owl, I found it from you own world." Syaedo said quietly.
    "Good thing you must be possibly the one who has a pet.. but I wish I could have one!"
    "Oh, you should better have one. They are loyal and always there to help you. I'll call him right now. Knut!"
    A beautiful male Snowy Owl flied to land. Syaedo held it.
    "He is beautiful, isn't he? Or just handsome?.."
    "Handsome? Oh, yes he is! I love animals." Lilium said.
    "This planet is a bit quiet.. good thing there was this city we could rest. Good evening. Yeah..!" Erus said joyfully.
    "Good thing I'm so safe with you guys."
    "And don't leave! I know your powerful." Sophos said to Syaedo.
    A nobody appeared.
    "A demon, eh..? It's just nasty, pwfah. Erus, your ancestor doesn't have a nobody.. what foolish rumors these are..." Destraxios said and the group was surprised.
    "Destraxios!" The group shouted.
    "No, not just only me. Aixozene is just behind you. I'll leave now." Destraxios created a dark portal. Erus ran and followed Destraxios.
    "Erus! What are you doing!.."
    "Don't run you ... you guys are just gonna fight me, not Erus, leaving me alone...!!" Aixozene shouted.
    (I think I don't have a nobody.. but maybe when I have one, I'll met him. Soon or sooner!) "Let's get this battle started!!!"
    "We will fight!"
     
  20. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    This is getting really good. Keep it up!
     
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