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My First character please review and give feedback(via PM/VM)

Discussion in 'Archive' started by dasglume, May 27, 2011.

  1. dasglume

    dasglume New Member

    Name- Lyrace Trammel
    Age- 19
    Race- human
    Position- No position at the present time
    Alignment- good
    Weapon- Four of a Kind: a keblade with a white hilt and a blade consisting of the four card symbols heart, spade, club, and diamond a though his heart is pure which alows him to hold the keblade his fun loving, gambling spirit forged this keyblade

    Abilities
    Main ability Draw card:
    2-10 of hearts: heals ally or self
    2-10 of diamonds: casts a protective aura on ally or self
    2-10 of clubs: makes keyblade heavier causes greater physical damage adds to ally or self
    2-10 of spades: sharpens keblade and reflexes making all attacks stronger faster and makes it easier to dodge attacks
    ace of hearts: takes the heart of one foe and turns it in to a healing burst to heal party
    ace of diamonds: protects party from all physical damage for a short time
    ace of clubs: slams heavy keyblade to create a seismic wave that damages all enemies
    ace of spades: run through all enemies slicing with every step hits multiple times
    jack of hearts: fully restores one ally or self
    queen of hearts: fully restores all allys and self
    king of hearts: raises dead by stealing the heart of another
    Jack of diomonds: creates protective barrier on all allys and self
    queen of daimonds: creates a healing protective sheild on all allys and self
    King of daimonds: healing protective sheild on all allys and self sheild also does minor damage to foes who come in contact
    Jack of clubs: jump and throw keyblade from above to damage one enemy
    queen of clubs: throw keyblade up and have it fall upon an unsespecting enemy
    King of clubs: slam into enemies from above creates minor damaging shockwave
    Jack of spades: speed through one enemy doing multiple slices
    Queen of Spades: throw keyblade through enemies and speed through to catch on the other side
    King of Spades: cut one enemy in twain
    joker: cast random status ailment to all enemies
    roullete: throws keyblade like a boomerang
    Heads i win tales you lose: hurls enemy into the air and places keyblade on floor as the enemy falls upon it

    Physical description:
    short about 5'7 thin and has short black hair. he wears a white longsleeved shirt that has two red diamonds on the shoulders and keeps a pattern to the end of the sleeve and flairs at the arms with a tight leather vest that zips up in the front and ties in the back that has a white clubs symbol on the chest area he has black skin tight jeans that have a red heart on the back pockets with two crisscrossed brown belts with each having a card deck holder and black shoes with a white spade on the front left ear peirces with a poker chip earring and brown eyes

    Personality:
    he loves playing around, but is pretty serious natured he is smart and a trickster. loves the thrill of battle its almost as good as winning the jackpot.

    History:
    he has been roaming the worlds looking for his father sightings of a man who looks the same was seen in the castle of oblivion when he finally got there he was met by luxord his fathers nobody after a short battle he was defeated and when he returned ready his father had already been slain by sora, now he wants revenge on the nobodies for taking his father but with all of them gone he has not much left to do except to go on a new adventure

    Strengths:
    Cunning and devious
    master of traps and tricks
    quick and agile in battle
    pretty strong
    Weaknesses
    Games (all kinds but once you start playing be ready to bet)
    money and clothes
     

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