ORBS(A struggle for the ultimate power)

Prolouge:

For centuries man has seeked to control the power over life and death, but no man has ever controled this power. The secret of the orbs has been discovered and now a new battle begins to control the orbs, to control life and death.


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CH 1:

raphaiel company president's office-

"mr.president, to focus our attention on one boy would distract us from searching for the orbs." the president replied, "if my suspicions are correct then we will find the orb quicker...so as president of this company i order all of you to track that boy." a scientist protested, "but sir..." the president shouted, "NO BUTS!!! now dismissed."

Mako Town: shinra street-

"i suppose i should get back to the church, it's getting late" zane said to himself. zane stood up and looked out to the ocean, "does nothing interesting ever happen in this town?" zane asked. "ah well...it's not like i would be a part of something interesting, i'm just the orphan that lives in an abandon church." zane bowed his head in depression. "ZANE!!!" a girl shouted from behind zane. zane turned around to face the girl and greeted her, "ariana, what are you doing here?" zane asked her. ariana replied, "i've been looking for you. why are you here anyway?" she asked. "i was just thinking..." zane mumbled. ariana looked confused, "what were you thinking about?" she asked. zane smiled and said, "nothing...don't worry about it." ariana smiled back and said, "well it's getting late so i'll see you tommorow." as ariana turned to leave she said, "don't forget tommorow we're going to the beach." zane replied, "don't worry...i'll be there." ariana nodded and walked back to her house. zane looked at the sunset, "i'll never let you down." he whispered.

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