Redemption's Side (OOC/Accompanying/Discussion Thread)

Redemption's Side

Pain....

Something that lies within this world. We feel it in emotions, memories, anywhere. It stays with us. It's what makes our lives miserable. Some try to avoid it, some love the sounds of screams.

Love...

What makes people whole. Someone they know they can lean on, someone to know cares for them, and they care back. It's the most powerful of emotions, they say love conquers all but... This world has changed...

Fighting Pain

Welcome to Ari, a kingdom that was peaceful, guarded by the light, separating it from the shadowy world. But darkness slithered its way to the throne, slowly killing the ruler by its lethal poison, causing anger and pain, something the people never experienced. The feelings, we're uncomfortable, but to some, it brought pleasure. The kingdom was cast into shadows, consuming every bit of light it could. All was lost... Or so they thought. A guard stormed away from the castle, a babe in his hands as he ran away from the downfall of the kingdom he protected. However, this guard was killed, the babe wrapped in cloth rolled out of his hands and rolled down a hill, to the door step, of a woman.

It has been 17 years since Ari fell, the dark King and Queen rule the land. They made the Kingdom suffer with their wrath and the pain they inflicted upon them, laughing with joy, knowing they were on top.

But the pure babe was gone, and had turned into a young, beautiful lady with the last pure heart left in the world. Little does she know her destiny will change the fate of Ari, and the world.

The Locations:

Ari:

The kingdom that was the last source of light in the world, now has become corrupted like the rest of it. It was once a beautiful place, with the buildings and the castle being made of ivory, steel and iron, this beautiful Kingdom was what symbolized hope that light still existed in the world. Now, the kingdom has been covered with darkness, barbed vines grow and bind the buildings and the castle, the water has become dirty and poisoness, no longer clear and clean, the people are paler, as the sun never shines anymore, but insted a black sky with a yellow moon, the castle now looks like a monster, gate and drawbridge are like it mouth and eyes, looking for prey to bring into a world of pain, torment and wrath, and the castle is now known as Black Hell.


The Forest Lands:

The people of Ari know not of the lands outside their kingdom, except dakrness looms over it. The outside world, or the Forest Lands are filled with humans, mystical creature and fairies, and many small towns. It is own known what else lies ahead besides the green, these lands are uncharted by the Arins, leaving them scared of the unknown. However, the King and Queen came from the Forest Lands, meaning dangerous and powerful beings lurk there as well.


The Blue:

The oceans surrounding the Forest lands and Ari are referred as The Blue, giver he water cloaks the rest of the word with a calm, relaxing blue color. It is said that The Blue leads to another land, but this is thought be a legend, and that it is not fully true.



Cast of characters:

Redeemed:


-The Pure One (The girl): The only pure one left in the world, it is her destiny to return Ari back into a kingdom of light, unaware of her role. (Open)
-Inhuman boy: A boy who is not alive, yet lives, a paradox of sorts. Born without a heart, he is tied to the Pure one as one of her guardiansZacax: Zechali)
-The half man, half beast: Annoutcast to the humans, he is tied to the Pure one as her other guardian. (Open)
-The mystical one: A mystical being who is the destined teacher for the Pure one, to aid her in skills needed to save Ari. (Destiny ())
-The Former Shadow: Brother and last Guardian to the Pure One, with the powers to control te darknes, to use it against the darkness. (Rush Ransom (BK))

The Shadows:


-The King of Wrath and Suffering: The King of the now corrupted Kingdom of Ari, he rules with his Queen as they slowly purge the world into total darkness. (Zexius Obuda (RoxasZ4))
-The Queen of Ruin and Pain: The queen to the new King, together they plan to destroy the light and conquer the world and shift it to their own image. (Summoner; ???)
-The Knight of Darkness: The personal guardian of both the King and Queen. (BK; Abbadon)
-The minions of the Shadows: Open, several can be minions.


TEMPLATE:
Before you join, you must make a profile template, and it must be accepted. All mythological species (Minus gods, demigods, deities) and humans are allowed. Remember to not OP or make a Mary Sue (They only exception can be the Pure One)

Name:*
Gender:
Age:
Role:
Apperance: (Either picture or description)
Personality:
History:
Tools and Weapons:
Powers and Gifts:
Theme (Optional)

All KHPlanet RP rules applied.

Have fun! I will post my OC after someone posts. ​

 

Of course, just make a template for her.

Anyways, my PC template

Name: Zechali
Gender: Male
Age: 2 (His appearance makes people thinks he is 15)
Role: Inhuman boy
Species: Half man half machine.
Appearance:

Zechali is very lanky and skinny in appearance, with shaggy brown hair, slightly spiked, one green eye, and pale white skin. His torso is made of bronze, in fact his skeleton is made of bronze metallic limbs, with artificial skin covering it made by magic. His body is runner by gears and magic, with a giant cog coming out of his back, his right arm has no skin, showing its compeltly mechanical bones and armor, that has a sword that can come out, his lower left leg has no skin either, showing themechanical limbs as well. He wears a pair of torn tan pants, the left pant stops at the knee, the other at the foot, wears a torn red shirt with black sleeves, and gold trimming on the armholes, and bottom part of the shirt, with the cog coming through the shirt, is barefooted, and wears a pair of copper goggles on his head.

Personality:

Zechali is very innocent minded, an very curious. He often treats everything with either interest or being afraid, or even both, seeing as he only existed in the world for two years, he has much to learn, dispite him being built to be really intelligent. He may have been built for combat as well, giving his blade and his sudden change to being aggressive in a fight. He doesn't really take a found interest in magic, and tries to find out how it works.

Tools and Weapons: Has an arm blade that can come out of his right arm.

History:

Zechali was made by an inventor and a wizard, a project to make mechanical humanoid beings to be more advanced than humans, and perform more dangerous tasks. Zechali was born without a heart or nervous system, and soon became self aware due to the magic. He ran away and started to live in a junkyard, near the castle of Ari. He lives there, being alone and fixing his body when it begins to fall apart.

He wants to feel love, happiness, and even if it means he has to feel pain, anger and misery, he wants a heart, so he can become a full human, and feel like he can fit in, something an inventor and wizard can't create.

Powers and Gifts: Super human strength, quick learning, adapting, ability to repair himself.

Theme: The Clockyard by Abney Park

 

Yea sure you can

 

Pretty good.

My only critique is the grammar.

Other than that, approved, remeber to use proper grammar and spelling in posting

 

Hmm....very interesting.

I approve, I'd like to see how this plays out.

 

Of course. The mystical one can be of either gender.

 

Well two things,

1) Thank you or pointing the fact I forgot to add descriptions to the rolls

2) I'll re edit the roles on the home page here in a sec, thanks for the reminder.

 

Alright then, and I just added the discriptions to TE roles to help you with your template.

 

Once we find a black knight and queen I'll post the page.