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~Stream Of Stars~

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by Keyblade Master Roxas, Jan 15, 2010.

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  1. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    ~Prologue~​

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    It has been about thirty years since the war of the Three Alchemists. All three of them wielded a special power that nobody had. The war was held in one island called "Jupiter"and in that island the three alchemist fought. All three of them were best friends, until a long journey destroyed their friendship. When the journey started they were sent by a harsh king named King Octavian. He had sent them on a long journey to find the Stream of Stars. The Stream Of Stars are little particles made out of dark matter that is very sacred. The three alchemist had no choice but to listen to their king. In the thirty years that they have been gone from their king, they journeyed to fifty-two islands, meeting a lot of mythical creatures and suffering from dangerous weathers. They've been stop by many weathers that threw them off course luring them to many islands. Until they got to the last one...
     
  2. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    Lol, this isn't the prologue. But the story plot.
    And i think you inspired by Full Metal Alchemist to make this story right?

    Make it longer and you may get my view from it. :)
     
  3. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Well my teacher says that it can be about the plot too, and no I haven't been inspired by Fullmetal Alchemist, it just came inside my head out of nowhere.
     
  4. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Chapter One
    ~Optus and Telstra~
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    When the sun rose up from its slumber it shined upon the three alchemist. They were bloody and looking lifeless. They were laying down on the island Jupiters mossy plain. One of the Alchemist Michael Angelo tried to move but he only flinched and closed his eyes slowly, his white silver hair was painted with red strips of blood and his face filled with cuts and bruises. His left arm was missing, probably from one of the fifty-two islands that he went to, but it was strapped into a cask so it was safe. Micheal Angelo opened his eyes looking up at the sunny sky, though it was sunny the white clouds were turning black and gray. He turned his head slowly looking at Wesley he too was looking at Michael, his eyes were watery and tears was dripping down his eyes until he closed them, not moving at all. Michael tried to say something but he couldn't. His old comrade dead in front of his face but he only just stared, stared at what used to be his friend. Micheal Angelo turned his head around and looked at Aura she was holding her family sword that was sacred in her family, her clothes were ripped and stained with blood. She gave a soft cough and turned to him Michael her eyes were turbulent eyes and frustration. The sun wasn't shining anymore and the clouds covered the whole sky. It started to rain and it started to pour rain water it was cold and the wind was blowing and Michael and Aura took a deep breath both at the same time and let it out slowly. They both was thinking about their journey how terrible it was though their was good time and of course bad times but it all led to this. They should of listened to the people who warned them warned them of what the king want is bad and very dangerous. But they ignored it. So it led to this...
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    The first journey Michael Angelo, Wesley, and Aura and their one hundred and fifty men traveled to is a Maelstrom and it's not an island it's a violent whirlpool named Optus and it eats everything that goes near it. It spits things out like it's vomiting. And it's protected by a sea monster named Telstra. Telstra is a sea monster that has eight arms and really sharp scales and teeth sharper then a sharks teeth, and she usually has a big grudge, with everybody. The only way to pass her is to pass a dangerous test.....
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    Aura raises her eyes brows and taps Michael lightly on the shoulder. "Hey Michael do you hear that?" Michael looks at Aura and his eyes widen. "Yeah I do, it's a weird sound I never heard before." it was a sound that sounded like people screaming and yelling for help, maybe that's how Optus and Telstra lures their prey. Michael the captain of their ship stops the ship with a snap. But it seems to be still moving in a fast rate. Wesley runs in and trips on his face and gets up rubbing his nose. "Ouch!.....Oh Michael, Aura it seems their is someone or something coming our way! But there's a thick fog outside and I can't really see anything...," Wesley said with panic in his voice, he runs up to Aura and Michael panting. "What do you think we should do?" Wesley asked worrying Aura. Michael and Aura ran to a near by window that was broken. Michael balanced himself by putting his hand on her shoulder, then leaned further out. "This is bad really bad guys, it seems we have company two companies...." Michael let go of Aura shoulder and he took out a piece of a mineral chalk that was in his pocket to the left. He drew a light circle on his brand new shirt that King Octavian gave him when they left. As Michael Angelo, Aura and Wesley ran to the deck of their ship their was a loud shriek so loud that all three of them had to cover their ears. The fog disappearing and all they could hear was a very loud ding nothing else. Then as the fog disappeared out appeared Telstra smiling. But it wasn't a nice smile it was a wicked smile. As she spoke she spoke with a heartless tone. "Who dares ruins my slumber" as she said that she grabbed five of Michael, Aura and Wesley men and hold them with a tight grip. They looked like fish trying their best to go back to the water and breath again. But Telstra swallowed them whole. Everything. Now the three Alchemist men were scared and they ran to hide but the Telstra grabbed five other men and ate them too. "Men men! their is no need to be scared," Weskey says. "Dear Telstra please we do not wish to harm you, we would just like to pass you, what can we do?" asked Wesley crossing his arms.Telstra coughed out the bones of the ten men she ate and gave it to Obtus. "YOU three would have to take a test....and that test....," Telstra said chucking and pointing to Obtus. "Is a test of speed and accuracy.."
     
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  5. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    Grammar's pretty good, nice long story i must say. Keep it up :)

    Btw, is that a cat on the first pic? lol
     
  6. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Thank you Silver ^_^
    Lol Yeah it is a cat. I do have my reasons.
     
  7. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Chapter 2
    ~Bow of Fire~​

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    After the evil sea monster Telstra told the three warriors about the test that they have to do. Wesley and Aura both were very nervous, until Michael snickered and told Telstra that he accepts the test.
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    Optus was hungry for the Three Alchemist and there men. It was angry with a lot of rage, winds were blowing harshly and and it was turning and turning really fast. Telstra crossed all her eight arms and looked at the three alchemist her eyes were dark red the color of blood, and she was smiling her famous wicked smile you can see a little of her razor sharp teeth, and little pieces of skin in her front teeth from the ten men that she ate. "First of all what are your names, young ones?" Telstra ask uncrossing her arms and pointing to the three alchemist with her scaleless fingers. Aura took a few steps back and stood up straight blowing her red bangs off her eyes. "My name is Aura and I am an Alchemist and these are my friends Michael Angelo and Wesley. They to are Alchemist. Just like I am." she looked up at Telstra with anger in her eyes. "Mm it's been a long time since I saw Alchemists here. Over fifty years. The last one I had was a young man but he was weak, he failed my test and disappeared," Telstra laughed. "He took the same test as you guys will now. But since he was weak he couldn't find the Bow of Fire. How despicable. How disappointed I was. If you three find the Bow of Fire and manage to pierce my heart with it. Then Optus will let you go. But if you find it and don't mange to pierce my heart with it by the time the sun set on the sixth hour you three and your men will die." Telstra explained rubbing her back with one of her arms and twisting her snake like hair. Michael raised an eyebrow and looked at Wesley and Aura who both were looking down sad and worried. "Where would this Bow of Fire be?" asked Michael
    Telstra looked at Michael and pointed to Obtus. "Like I said the test will be about speed and accuracy, down in core of Obtus there is a cave an in that cave the Bow of Fire sleeps." As Telstra said that she grabbed all three of the Alchemist and threw them inside of Obtus. It happened so fast that Michael, Aura and Wesley didn't had time to react to it. They were turning and turning around and around listening to the harsh screams that sounded like people calling for help. Inside Obtus you can see many spirits swirling around in there. They looked old and wrinkly. Wesley closed his eyes because he scared,but Aura took his hand and hold it tight she also hold Michael hand and all three of them looked down until they saw a yellow light. The whirlpool seemed endless like it would never stop turning and turning. All three of them only had six hours to find the Bow of Fire. The light seemed to get closer though. Al three of them closed their eyes and then opened them and they appeared to be standing on a cave it was dark and very eerie. All three of them were wet and all soaked up. But Aura manage to dry up her clothes and the two others. Aura looked up and you an see the cave yes but also Obtus and on the top was Telstra waving at them and showing the time. This time they had only one hour left. How could this happen Aura thought to herself five hours past already without them noticing. "Guys we only have one hour left we have to find the Bow....of Fire...We have to." Aura started to panic and little but Michael helped her by saying "The Sea Witch said all we need to do is find the Bow of Fire and kill her with it. Right?" Michael said putting on his shirt. "RIGHT!" Aura and Wesley said both at the same time."Then lets do this! We went threw worse thing then this have we not?" asked Michael looking at Aura and Wesley. Aura sighed and pointed towards the top. "What if we find the Bow of Fire but we cannot kill her?" Aura murmured. Michael Angelo lifted a brow. It wasn't something he thought of. He simply said. "We will simply use Alchemy then." While Aura and Michael was thinking about a fast plan. Wesley walked towards a door that was in back of some rocks. He opened the door and found chest. His eyes gleamed and as he opened the chest slowly and he found the Bow of Fire if seemed to be covered in red seaweed. Wesley cut the red seaweed. He picked the bow and the three arrows up and gave an arrow to Michael and Aura. They were please at Wesley and they both smiled. Michael Angelo, Aura and Wesley drew a circle in there chest with mineral chalk. They put the tip of the arrow in there chest and the tip lit on Fire. It was light and comforting All three of them pulled the Bow with the Three arrows on it and let it all go. When they did that the three arrows combined with each and made a huge arrow it went straight up past Obtus and without warning pierced right threw Telstra. She shrieked and fell all the way down Obtus until she landed on the cave ground dead and not moving at all. As soon as she landed down on the caves grounds. The three Alchemist suddenly appeared on their ship. They opened their eyes and the ship was moving again. All three of them looked back and saw Obtus disappearing. But as it was disappearing they heard a soft thank you. They smiled and departed to the next island named Samarra.
     
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