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The mask and the mirror

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Gods_Princess, Jan 19, 2012.

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  1. Jan 19, 2012 #1
    Gods_Princess

    Gods_Princess New Member

    There is girl, who has suffered greatly, so she builds a mask to hide. Over the years the mask became hard, with few cracks. One day the girl decides o look in the mirror, not seeing the mask she was concerned. The mirror she was looking at, showed her who she really was as well as the condiction of her life and relationships. She noticed through the mirror, many of her relationships were on the verge of shattering, because of the life she leads, only a few of her relationships were in decent condition. Then she noticed the mirror behind her. It was in perfect condiction, as well as the most beautful mirror she had ever seen. It suprised her that she had not seen it before, it was enormous. Then she remembered the mask, it had blocked her view of the mirror. She had been so blinded by the mask, she could not truly see the world around her. Ever so slowly the mask around her began to crumble and fall away, as she gazed into the mirror that had formerly escaped her veiw.

    The reflection in His Mirror
    is what we ought to be
    But we can't face the fear inside
    Or the impossibilty.
    In truth we don't want to fall
    And risk being broken
    But that's where He does His work
    And gives us every token.
    At rest in His securing arms
    There's peace even with the scars
    That slowly heal with His grace
    Giving us power to run His race.
     
    Last edited: Jan 20, 2012
  2. Feb 2, 2012 #2
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    You had a few grammar errors in there. I can put up the exact corrections in there. That... and you have commas in there that do not have to be there but I am not too worried about that. :) I like the comparison between how one tend to try to hide themselves instead of looking deep down inside themselves and face what may happen through endurance.

    There is a girl, who has suffered greatly, so she builds a mask to hide. Over the years the mask became hard with a few cracks. One day the girl decides to look in the mirror, not seeing the mask she was concerned. The mirror she was looking at, showed her who she really was as good as the condition of her life and relationships. She noticed through the mirror, many of her relationships were on the verge of shattering, because of the life she leads, only a few of her relationships were in decent condition. Then she noticed the mirror behind her. It was in perfect condition, as well as the most be.

    The reflection in His Mirror
    is what we ought to be
    But we can't face the fear inside
    Or the impossibilty.
    In truth we don't want to fall
    And risk being broken
    But that's where He does His work
    And gives us every token.
    At rest in His securing arms
    There's peace even with the scars
    That slowly heal with His grace
    Giving us power to run His race.
     
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