Remedy

Well most 13 year olds are lucky if they can even speak perfect English let alone type proper grammar that which is usually taught to them about freshmen year of high school.

Cmon Face me!

Scared Cmon Face me heh 2v1 is fun!

I'll take you on but read my arena rules first!

No reason to appologize for a mess to be created, multiple people are involved and such.

But as for your writing, yes too much a demmand for battling. Battling is great but it gets boring pretty quick, it also can get confusing without a lot of details so readers(or other RP'ers) can truly picture the battle in their head.

You have occassional gramatical mistakes, those most often made when one types quickly and does not go back through to read it. Heck, in my last VM for you I see my own grammatical mistake with could which should be couldn't or could not.

Then one thing which will help greatly with your writing (and if you have problems gaining RP line limit) is add details. Details make readers, happy campers. With details every precise detailed can be pictured in ones head and be made real.

Really besides all else, it's pretty good, especially for your age.

No I knew, I just with all the chaos, could find a good way to post him. Unless I can make a rather good post that truly adds to the story, I won't post. Plus if you haven't already you'll see my post in your RP's ooc

Oh yes. Make sure that you make a list as to what summons are available in your roleplay and the types of races that are available. People will not be able to know what they can summon and the members here may try to make up a race of their own that would not make any sense.

Yep. A little bit better.

Yeah I know the drill. Sorry about that, my internets been weird, and I've only been able to get on with my phone.

I just stop caring about it eventually

Dude no offense but his sign up was basically a list of powers and feats. Destiny and I actually tried to put time into ours and he says mine are crap???

I say it's up to you. If you wanna test him then have him PM me and we'll try him out with a battle...

look people will want to join regardless of alot and the temp i presented was better than most of them ( i would call destiny's better than mine since she barely tried in that temp she made) so can you please reconsider

cuz i havent been on latley and three pages have gone by already and i havent posted thats all but yeah thats a relief...

am i out of roleplay???

I suggest that you add in some more detail to the plot. People will hardly be able to join if they really do not know what the story is truly is about besides the fact that magic is disappearing and that a evil dictator is absorbing the magic.

I signed up for your KH3 role-play check it out

Meh. Just create your own final fantasy. You can try to do a final fantasy roleplay based on the magics disappearing and how heroes (can be from the games or made-up) are trying to save the magic.

thanks for the welcome