A Lost World OOC

So it wasn't that bad? It looked gooey to me, but what ever. I need more than one guys opinion. My moms a writer, so i'll ask her. You are right you know, it's nice to get out of ones comfort zone every now and again. I assume you know what it means by the black blossom touching there flower of love. Gag, that really did suck. Moms gonna laugh really hard at me.

 

Good. Just remember, i don't always do what people think i will. Will they stay together? I dunno. Will they part? I dunno. I do know this, Zack is a reflection of me. He fights just like how i would, he talks like me, and he certainly acts like me.

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Lol, the only thing that didn't suck in that post was the romance she said. Wow, i feel happy and sad. Happy i got one thing right, sad i got the rest wrong. Which is better do ya think? Well I'm signing off for the night. Laterz

 

Lol, are you quoting me from Club?

 

SUBCONCIOUS: The perfect mind game.

 

Haresuno, do you know that guy in real life? Cause then i should.

*if Dreich is a girl sorry. This site doesn't show gender very well, so it's all guess work.

 

I used to go to the same school as him as well. Oi, Hare. Remember me to him.

 

wow, and here i am waiting on u. XD. You could have posted any where between the time you last pm'd me to when u posted this.

 

definitely and maybe should never be used in the same sentence. One contradicts the other. Definitely is a word meaning something will happen. Maybe just means something might happen. But i don't know if you were making a joke. At best i can prove i know what they mean XD.

 

I mentioned that i was pretty sure it was a joke. I was stating that I know what they would mean.

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Hey just so you all know, i'm seeing a lot of stuff that doesn't make sense in this rp. Just some advice to help remedy this, nice word remedy. First, make sure that you have everything thought out before you start typing. Second, make sure you use spell check. It's there for a reason and while it might make 1 or 2 mistakes, it won't let one of yours slide by. Finally, re read your post out loud to yourself after you type it. Grammer check won't help you, so you need to do that to make sure everything is grammatically correct. Again, just some advice. Also, make sure you use the same tense throughout the rp, or it could get confusing. I mean things like present, past, future tense. I end up seeing a few tense issues, but nothing very serious. This has been a public service announcement from a happy writer who is still unpublished.

 

Meh, works for me.