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A new hope

Discussion in 'Archive' started by KnuXl3s, Jul 27, 2008.

what do u think of the story on tthis RP

Poll closed Feb 15, 2009.

  1. do you like it

    7 vote(s)
    77.8%

  2. do you hate it

    2 vote(s)
    22.2%
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  1. Jul 30, 2008 #161
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    ooc
    yeah that's good with me
     
  2. Jul 30, 2008 #162
    Exfir

    Exfir New Member

    OOC:
    Me too, just wanted to finis that post lol
     
  3. Jul 30, 2008 #163
    Ramayana

    Ramayana New Member

    OOC: Fine by me.
     
  4. Jul 30, 2008 #164
    Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    ........ I quit.
     
  5. Jul 31, 2008 #165
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    "Yeah I know but I choose this fight and I can take this guy and I want it to be a one on one fight so stay out of it or i will fight you" Nagi said in such a serious voice that you thought he would kill the next person who attacked Diamo
     
  6. Jul 31, 2008 #166
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    "Nago, please be careful" Shino said to his brother.
     
  7. Jul 31, 2008 #167
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Nagi turned around and looked at his brother but he didnt care about being careful Nagi is in a bloodlust trance only thing he cares about is to kill that air bender
     
  8. Jul 31, 2008 #168
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Shino turned to Dinahi and blood was gushing from her nose.
    "Uh...don't you want to wash that off?"
    "Oh yeah"
    Dinahi washed the blood off with some water.
    She gave him a beautiful smile and then turned towards Nagi.
    "She is so beautiful" Shino thought.
     
  9. Jul 31, 2008 #169
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Nagi punched his hands into the earth and lifted out a giant slab of rock holding it high above his head then he ripped it in half coating his entire body in rock Nagi now resembled a golem made of earth he was three times larger than before
    "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh" Nagi screamed as he ran towards the air bender
     
  10. Jul 31, 2008 #170
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Although the pain from his injuries were throbbing, Shino had to help.
    He was making a fireball, which grew larger by every second.
     
  11. Jul 31, 2008 #171
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Nagi turned around and noticed what his brother was doing and Nagi snaped out of his state of mind he saw his brother was slowly killing himself from using to much energy
    "Shino no that will zap all the energy out of you..How will you heal if you dont have the energy" Nagi said with a scared look on his face worring about his brothers safty
     
  12. Jul 31, 2008 #172
    Ramayana

    Ramayana New Member

    Daimo saw his chance. Laughing madly, he plunged his katana deep into Nagis back!
     
  13. Jul 31, 2008 #173
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    "ahhh"Nagi screamed as he turned around and punched Diamo in the face there was no emotion on Nagis face his face was blank like Nagi was no longer in his body after he was stabbed in the back
     
  14. Jul 31, 2008 #174
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    "NOOO!" Shino screamed.
    He zoomed towards the airbender and stabbed him in the chest area, hopefully at the heart. He then crashed the fireball he made onto Daimo.
     
  15. Jul 31, 2008 #175
    Ramayana

    Ramayana New Member

    Daimo lost his energy. He fell, and landed in the sand. Standing up grogilly, proping himself on his sword, he spat out a tooth, and said, "You guys just don't know when to quit.." he then fell over, from exhaustian and hurt
     
  16. Jul 31, 2008 #176
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Shino fell to the ground in a great thud.
    He closed his eyes in absolute exhaustion and felt the life drifting away from his body.
     
  17. Jul 31, 2008 #177
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Nagi saw what hi brother did and he watch him fall to the ground
    "please brother get up whos gunna take care of your girl when your dead cause you know its not me I'm no good when it comes to girls" Nagi replied as he walked over to the airbender
    "get up you worthless piece of life you and I arnt done yet"
     
    Last edited: Jul 31, 2008
  18. Jul 31, 2008 #178
    Ramayana

    Ramayana New Member

    Daimo was prepared for death.
    Thats when the voice came.
    "You are an evil man, Daimo Ryutashkin. You have killed this boys brother. You have been condemed."
    Daimos heart opened up.
    "Let him live, please..."
    "I will let you both live, but you will be crippled for life; your arm will be beyond repair."
    "Yes, I will live with it."
    "Then it is done."
     
    Last edited: Jul 31, 2008
  19. Jul 31, 2008 #179
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Shino did not respond to his brother's joke and stayed lying down onto the ground.
     
  20. Jul 31, 2008 #180
    KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Nagi picked up Diamo with one arm and said
    " Were not done" He screamed as he punched him in the face
    " You dare hit me while I was helping my brother for that I will show no mercy"
    And again he hit him over and over until nagi couldnt lift his own fists
     
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