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Kingdom Hearts: Destinies

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by ADogX, Jan 14, 2011.

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  1. Abyssal Knight

    Abyssal Knight I step back into the light of...

    Amazing. Also try to explain what's going on a lot more meaning making the actions of the characters a lot more detailed. But overall it's coming great love the story-line and keep it coming!
     
  2. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    Truth of Destinies

    "The...Destiny Guardian? Where are you? Show yourself!" Antonio shouted.

    "I have no being. In fact, I am speaking through you all telepathically," the Destiny Guardian explained.

    "Does it matter?! Tell us who you are and what you want!" Alex shouted in anger.

    "For once I care about what's going on. Explain yourself. This is too confusing..." Leo said in confusion.

    "Leo, for once, you care about something other than science and water..." Adam suprisingly explained.

    "Very well if you are all so persistant. The Worlds of Hope are about to experience pain and anguish. A possibility if them being destroyed. I have chosen the four of you, and three others, to save them. There are four worlds. Fuedal Era, Soul Society, Villiage Hidden in the Leaves, and a world that take place in an alter world Tokyo, Japan. The four of you are to travel to these worlds and stop someone named Dark Blood. He's plotting to destroy them for one reason. Hope sickens him. He also plans to become what he calls, "Ruler of Existance." Once he's done that, he plans to destroy anyone who gets in his way. Especially, you four and the other three Destiny Warriors I have chosen. Two of them, and including Dark Blood, have a strong connection with one of you." The Destiny Guardian explained.

    "So that explains....what now?" Antonio asked.

    "IT MEANS THAT PEOPLE ARE GOING TO DIE AND YOU'RE THE ONLY ONES WHO CAN SAVE THEM!"

    "Calm down! This is too sudden like a video game. What you're saying is, we're supposed to be heroes like in...Superman?" Leo stupidly asked.

    "I thought you were about to say something smart..." Adam said, dissapointed.

    "You guys are complete idiots I swear..." Alex said.

    Nothing like the sort. You're all supposed to be heroes like in Kingdom Hearts. But only three of the seven Destiny Warriors wield Keyblades."

    "Oh brother. This day gets more sudden and sudden."

    I will release the powers you've all gained from touching the orbs. But before I do that, I must release the powers that are stored within the Purple, Orange, and Pink orbs. Craze, Spike, and Jessica will recieve their powers very soon. They are the other three I have chosen." At the very instant, a beam of light shot up into the air from the other orbs. The lights vanished within seconds.

    "Craze and...and Spike...?" Antonio began to have another memory and his eyes went blank again.

    "Antonio, Spike, one day, we're gonna be great heroes together. Along with Cloud and Zack. And who knows, maybe we'll even get to meet the hero Spehiroth that everyone talks about," Craze explained.

    "Just remember this, no matter what, we stick together. If one of us is about to die in battle, no matter how far we are, we'll come to save him," Spike explained. Then, in Antonio's memory, he saw someone sitting right next to them in the truck. He saw himself.

    It's a promise. And no matter what, we continue to fight every day to protect those we care about," He explained. Antonio then came back to his senses.

    "Another...memory? It feels so real. What the hell's going on?" Antonio whispered to himself.
     
  3. Abyssal Knight

    Abyssal Knight I step back into the light of...

    Nice.!! I'm actually starting to get into this. Oh and Village hidden in the leaf?(Naruto?)
     
  4. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    That's what it reminded me of too!

    Anyways, the story is coming along quite nice; it would be great though if in the next post a bit more detail was in it instead of it mainly being people talking to one another. You know, like describing their thoughts in more detailed emotion, explaining the surroundings, etc...

    It's an interesting story and I can't wait to see what you end up doing with it. It was cool how you changed the font colour for the speech of the different characters (;
     
  5. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    i want to try something new. the colors will represen the different characters. Adam will be green, Leo blue, Alex black, Antonio gray, and Destiny Guardian Italic. tell what you think on this.

    The Start of a New Journey

    "Ok so let's clarify this. We're supposed to be saving worlds correct?"

    "Correct"

    "And we're supposed to be able to have, "powers," to save them?"

    "And we're also supposed to have weapons like Keyblades?"

    "All correct."

    "This is so damn wierd. So why do WE have to do this? We never did anything special to deserver something like this. We're just average kids.

    "Average you say? Not in the slightest. Adam, have you ever wondered why you could nearly float in mid-air? Leo, have you ever wondered how you can breathe underwater for so long? Alex have you wondered how you can see in the dark?"

    "He's right. We've always wondered how we can do all this. But, what about Antonio?"

    "Antonio's special. He can't be hurt by fire. And, he has a past that he doesn't remember. You remember the memories you've recently been seeing?"

    "A past that I can't remember? How can I not remember my own past?"

    "You'll learn in due time. Now on to more important matters. As i promised, I will now give you the powers needed for your journey." Light began to cover the brothers. Then wind spun around Adam. Water surrounded Leo. Darkness sprouted from within Alex. And Fire arose from Antonio's feet. "And now i will also give you the weapons needed that reside from within you're hearts." In Adam's two hands, large, double-sided Flails almost the size of him appeared from the light. In Leo's hands, two large Shurikens with 6 points on each appeared. In Alex's left hand, a Keyblade appeared. It was all red, with a skinny trapezoid as the handling area, and the Symbol of Shadow the Hedgehog was at the striking point. In Antonio's hands, two Keyblades of opposite colors appeared. They both looked like the Kingdom Key that the Keyblade master, Sora used, except the one in his right hand, was reversed colored.

    "Shurikens huh? I've always studied on the ninja fighting style."

    "I know i've studied on fighting with a double-sided weapon, but flails? This isn't Midevil Times is it?"

    "So I'm one of the three Keybladw wielders huh? Well I'm pissed that you guys get two weapons and I only get one."

    "Just shut up already Alex. Be glad you're holding a Keyblade." Antonio looked at his Keyblades. He grew quiet, remembering Sora's journey from the Kingdom Hearts series. He wondered why he weilds two, since he studied in a 1 on 1 weapon combat.

    "As I promised, you're weapons and abilties are now unlocked. I must now take my leave. I trust that you'll all save the Worlds of Hope." In just a sudden gust of wind, the voice of the Destiny Guardian was gone.

    "What the hell is with this darkness that's spreading around me? I'm not evil. I'm just an asshole." Alex smiled and laughed at his comment. Then, Adam jumped into the air, floating like gravity never existed.

    "Hehe, this is fun and awesome."

    "Funny how I can control water. Now I'll never lose in a splash fight." Leo joked while Alex gave him a dirty look.

    "Idiot."

    "Well I don't know about you guys, but I'm not shocked suprisingly. I feel like I've held these Keyblades before. And, that I've been in past fights and nearly died. I'm starting to believe in what the Destiny Guardian said about me not remembering a past." Just then, a portal of light appeared in front of the borthers.

    "I'm gettin' real sick of these sudden actions that's been happening in the last hour!" Alex grew pissed right away.

    "You got problems Alex, but you're right about that."

    "What do you think we shoudl do Antonio? Go through the light?" Antonio then thought for a couple seconds.

    "Might as well. Hehe, beats doin' nothing."

    "Hmph, 'bout time you said somethin' smart." The brothers then walked through the portal of light, to the beginning of what could be, for them, the end.

    .......................

    So what do you guys think? Will this layout work better or no?
     
  6. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    It's a different format, but I prefer when at the end of a characters speech it says, 'Antonio exclaimed traumatically' or something along those lines. I find it's easier to follow the story and less confusing when that is written in because sometimes I forgot which person's dialogue colour I was reading >.<

    Anyways, the story is quite nice and I'm excited to see what's through the portal of light. Take your time and don't forget to add some details about the surroundings. It helps the reader visualize what is happening.
     
  7. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    Brothers Made Ryoka

    While the brothers were walking in a path of light, they were discussing the issue of their situation.

    "I'm still a little suprised. The happened so sudden and now we're in some sorta light path," Adam explained.

    "Who cares? In sense, we'll be doing something other than running for our lives," Leo pointed out.

    "Yeah but now we'll be FIGHTING for our lives," Alex also pointed out. Antonio thought to himself about what the Destiny Guardian told him.

    He has a past that he doesn't remember

    "I don't understand. How can I not have a past that I can't remember? Is it really true? The memories felt so real. And i saw myself in them. I still don't know for sure. Man, those two names are really bugging me. Craze and Spike...are they somehow connected to my 'forgotten past'? Antonio thought to himself. Adam, Alex, and Leo continued to talk about the situation until a brighter light than the path they were taking began to shine.

    "What the hell!?" Alex shouted. He and the brothers put their arms in front of their eyes to block out the brightness. In a flash of a second, they were falling from the sky.

    "What the heck just happened!? We're falling from like, 6,000 feet high! We're dead once we hit the ground!" Leo shouted. The Destiny Guardian's voice then began to speak inside Antonio's mind.

    "Do not fear the fall. You will be hurt when you land, but you will not die." Antonio decided to be calm.

    "Guys don't worry about the drop. We're going to live," Antonio explained.

    "Are you crazy!? No way we're gonna live from a drop from THIS hight!" Adam shouted. As they got closer to the ground, they noticed a large gray, black, and white city. They felt something liken a barrier touch them, but they fell right through it.

    "The hell? Why do I feel like we passed some sort of wall?" Alex asked. The brothers almost hit the ground.

    "Brace yourselves!" Leo shouted. When the brothers hit the ground, the ground shaked and a large sound like an explosion sounded through the air.

    "Ow, ow, ow, ow, ow. How did we live through that?" The brothers were laying on the round in pain.

    "Told you not to worry," Antonio said.

    "Who cares!? It still hurt like hell!" The brothers then noticed Adam was already on his feet, laughing at Antonio, Leo, and Alex.

    "Hahaha! I think it's funny you guys hurt yourselves! I just landed on my feet with no pain!" Adam shouted.

    "That's 'cause your control wind. I figured that'd happen anyway," Alex pointed out. While the brothers were taking time to recover, someone shouted over what seemed to be an intercom. It seemed to be about the brothers.

    "Attention! Four Ryoka have entered the Sariete'! This is not a drill! I reapeat, four Ryoka have entered the Sariete'! Capture them at all costs!" The man shouted.

    "I guess they're talking about us. Great. Just what we need. More problems," Leo explained. Just then, someone appeared in front of the brothers in a flash. He was bald with white skin and blue eyes. There was a red line by his eyes. He was wearing black and white clothing and carried a sword in his right hand, and a sword sheeth in his left.

    "You guys are just a buncha kids. I can't believe the Head Captain is worried about four kids," the man said.

    "Who are you!?" Antonio asked.

    "Who am I? I am the third seat of squad 11 of the Thirteen Court Guard Squads. I, am Ikkaku Madarame!"
     
  8. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    good much better than the first capter though explain the background more than just a black and white city
     
  9. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    Angering Ikkaku

    "Ikkaku...Madarame? Never heard of you. And what a stupid name," Antonio said, insulting Ikkaku.

    "Never heard of me!? Stupid name!? I will kill you all!" Ikkaku shouted.

    "And another thing, why are you bald?" Alex asked. Ikkaku became enraged at the comment.

    "I...AM...NOT...BALD!!!!!!!" Ikkaku shouted.

    "You get mad real easy it seems," Adam explained. Ikkaku's eyes began to twitch.

    "You're all pissing me off! I'm gonna make this quick! And you guys better be fun to fight if you got words to say!" Ikkaku then put his sword and sheeth together from the ends. "Extend! Houzukimaru!" He shouted. Wind that looked like a tornado whirled around his sword and sheeth and then out of the wind and in his hands was an orange spear. The was red fur on the bottom and the sharp point was the same color as his sword.

    "What the heck just happened?" Leo asked.

    "How do you not know what a Soul Reaper's Shikai is!? You invade the sariete and don't know something as simple as that!?" Ikkaku grew angry and insulted.

    "To be honest, we don't know what any of that stuff is," Antonio explained. Ikkaku grew even more mad.

    "First that orange haired Soul Reaper and now all of you!? I'm getting sick of this talk! Let's get down to business,"

    "You sure you wanna fight us four-on-one? You're out numbered," Alex pointed out.

    "I only fight one-on-one battles," Ikkaku pointed at Antonio. "You're my first customer!" Ikkaku then launched himself at Antonio, beginning the battle.
     
    Last edited: Feb 24, 2011
  10. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I like it but would you please make everything white from now on? I am not into the different colors.
     
  11. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    Antonio's Hidden Skill

    Ikkaku charged at Antonio. Adam, Alex and Leo were about to help him but Antonio waved his hand at them telling them to stay back.

    "I can handle myself. I feel like this is not going to be a problem," Antonio explained.

    "C'mon kid! Show me what you got!" Ikkaku shouted. He lunged his spear at Antonio straight at him and Antonio dodged it. But suddenly, the pole split into different pieces connected by chains and tangled Antonio.

    "Didn't see that coming, but not enough!" Antonio released fire from his body, breaking free. "How am I so confident? I feel like this is no problem," Antonio thought to himself. He then brought out his Keyblades.

    "That's a neat trick kid, bringing out your swords out of thin air. But why do your Zanpaktous have that wierd design?" Ikkaku asked.

    I told you, I don't know what a Zanpaktou is! These are called Keyblades."

    "Never the less, you're gonna lose!" Ikkaku chared at Antonio again with his spear fully intact. Antonio then blocked Ikkaku's attack with both his Keyblades. He then swung his right Keyblade and struck Ikkaku's arm. His arm was then dripping blood.

    "H-how did he do that?! He cut his arm with a simple swing!" Adam shouted, suprised.

    "Hehe..you're pretty good kid," Ikkaku laughed. C'mon, fight me some more!" Ikkaku began to lung at Antonio, but before he got the chance, Antonio was somehow already in front of him. Antonio then struck Ikkaku in the left arm with his left Keyblade, and stabbed him through the chest with his right. Antonio's eyes were serious.

    "It was that easy huh? For you to lose someone who has never faught with swords before, you must be ashamed," Antonio said. His brothers were silent and in shock by what Antonio said. Antonio then took his Keyblade out of Ikkaku's chest and began to walk away as Ikkaku fell to the ground, still concious.

    "Do you-do you really think I'm gonna lost to you!?" Ikakku shouted. He got up and ran at Antonio with his spear, but he was moving very slow. Antonio then turned around, eyes still serious.

    "You just don't quit do you?" Antonio the got ready to throw his right Keyblade at Ikkaku. "Strike...Raid!" Antonio shouted as he threw the Keyblade. Then there was a blue ring around it and it hit Ikkaku in the face, knocking him out cold. The Keyblade then flew right back Antonio from the same direction.

    "How-how did you do that?" Leo asked in shock.

    "I call it him kicking his ass," Alex said.

    "I don't know. I guess I..." Antonio fainted as he was talking.

    "Antonio? Antonio! Wake up!" Adam shouted. Antonio did not move.

    >Sorry Summoner, i know you want the colors to be normal but honestly, I'm not gonna change it for one person. PurpleDiamond and Darian like it. If they change their mind about it I'll be happy to get rid of the colors.
     
  12. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    A Full Memory's Revealiation

    Three figures walked into the Shinra building. Two of them were twin brothers, and one was a a very young child, about the same height as the brothers. The child did not know the brothers in any way. All three were invited by the President of Shinra, to be apart of SOLDIER. A high class of warriors to protect the city of Midgar, and other places around the world.

    "Good evening gentlemen," The president began. "The three of you have been chosen to be apart of SOLDIER for your impresive skill of combat. Though you are all very young, you are very well trained. We hope the three you will be a great addition to SOLDIER. Unfortunately, seing as the three of you are new and young, we must place you at SOLDIER class 3. The lowest class, but the stronger you grow and more skilled, you will move up into class 2, and hopefully into class 1, along with Angeal and the great hero Sephiroth." The president then finished his speech and dismissed the three young SOLDIER members.

    The man in an orange sweater walked up to the young child, who was in a gray sweater.

    "You're pretty young kid, what's your name? And how old are you?" The man asked.

    "My...my name is Antonio. I'm ten," he replied.

    "Hmf, Craze stop acting all old. You and I are both twelve," Said the other brother, who was in a purple sweater, also revelaing his brother's name is Craze. He then walked up to Antonio. "My name's Spike. This is my brother, Craze." Spike wore a purple sweater, blue jeans and purple shoes. He wore a purple headband and had spiky triangle hair pointing up. Craze wore the same as Spike, but the purple was instead orange. He had skinny spikey hair pointing up. Antonio was the same height as the twins, who were 5'5.

    "Well then, i guess I can stop acting so young!" Antonio suddenly shouted. I'm more mature than most ten year olds. So don't expect me to not understand anything."

    "Something's telling me we're all gonna get along great," Craze said. The and announcement from the Shinra building was made through and intercom as Antonio and the brothers walked into the main lobby.

    "Will Craze, Spike, and Antonio please report to the truck outside waiting for them to be dropped off at SOLDIER headquarters to pick up your uniforms," The announcer said. They all did as was told. They began to talk again as the truck was leaving after they got in, sitting in the back on benches.

    "Hey did you hear that Zack and Cloud got into SOLDEIR?" Spike asked Craze.

    "You know Spike and Cloud too? I've known them for a long time," Antonio explained.

    "Huh? How have we not noticed this? I guess that means we all grew up in the same town and didn't know it, even though Zack was from somewhere else. He saved me, my brother, and some other kid that was with us three years ago. Craze said.

    "Wait what!? I was that kid!"

    "Seriously? Well no wonder we got along so easily just now," Spike explained.

    "If that's the case, then Antonio, Spike, one day, we're gonna be great heroes together. Along with Cloud and Zack. And who knows, maybe we'll even get to meet the hero Sephiroth that everyone talks about, Craze said.

    Suddenly, everything went black, and Antonio woke up. He was laying down in a sewer. The water was green and the walls were orange. Adam, Alex, and Leo were sleeping right next to him.

    "The visions are getting stronger and more real. I have a feeling I'm gonna meet somebody very important soon," Antonio said to himself.
     
    Last edited: Mar 9, 2011
  13. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    I was at first confused reading this latest post, but now I understand that it was Antonio's dream!
    Anyways, the story is coming along nicely. You've improved greatly since you first began posting; you should be proud of yourself.
    Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens next.x
     
  14. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    A One on One Conversation

    Antonio sat by a wall waiting for his brothers to wake up. He continued to think about why he passed out and about his dream, and memories. He begins to feel that he will meet someone he was once close to very soon. Then during his thoughts, Leo awakens.

    "Leo what happened? Did I really pass out when after my fight?" Antonio asked.

    "Yeah you did. Me, Adam and Alex thought that you you were dead, though we over-reacted. We wanted to know where we could hide since we know that Ikkaku wasn't going to be the only one wanting to fight us. Alex suddenly found an entrance to these sewers so we decided to hide here. Believe it or not, you've slept for a whole day," Leo explained.

    "Twenty-Four hours? Damn what the hell did I do to myself?"

    "We were all amazed out how you faught. We had no clue you could fight like that. Adam even got a little scared. He told us, while you were asleep, that your eyes and your emotions were not you at all. Your eyes even turned green!"

    "Eyes turning green...why does that sound familier?"

    "No matter the case, we're safe, but we gotta figure out why we're in this world, and what we have to do."

    "Alright, but we need to wait for Alex and Adam to wake up. Can't leave 'em behind." Leo then heard footsteps coming toward them from the distance. He and Antonio then saw three figures running straight for them.

    "Damn! We need to wake up Adam and Alex now!" Leo shouted. Antonio tried to wake Adam and Alex, but before they got a chance to wake up, the three figures stopped running and looked straight at them.
     
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2011
  15. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    Meeting New Allies

    The three figures just stared at Antonio and Leo. One of them had a giant sword on his back and had orange hair. He also had Blue eyes. He was wearing the same clothes as the person Antonio fought. The second was smaller than the brothers and had long-ish dark blue hair and blue eyes as well. He wore the same clothes that the taller one was wearing, but was carrying a white sack on his back. The third was wearing a Due Rag on his head, and was wearing shaggy pants and clothes. His eyes were brown.

    "Who-who are you?" The small one asked. "You don't look like Soul Reapers. And I don't sense any Spiritual Pressure. Are...you guys Hollows?" Antonio and Leo's minds were blank.

    "...Spitirual..Pressure, Hollows...what the hell are you talking about?" Leo asked.

    "Let's just keep going. They're not a threat. Sorry to bother you," The orange haired Soul Reaper said, as he and the other two were alking away.

    "It's a good thing. I thought you were like that guy Ikkaku and wanted to fight us," Antonio said. The orange haired Soul Reaper stopped walking and turned around to face Antonio.

    "You know Ikkaku? And you fought him?"

    "And won. Somehow I did, I have no idea. He was also calling me and my brothers Ryoka. I have no idea what he's talking about. He asked what kind of Zanpaktou my weapons were. Do you know what all this stuff is?"

    "Ichigo, I don't like this. They might just be trying to trick us," The man with the due rag said, revealing the orange haired Soul Reaper's name was Ichigo.

    "I don't think so Ganju. They seem friendly. And confused. Hanatarō, make a fire. Let's rest for tonight," Ichigo said. He revealed the names of the other two were Ganju and Hanatarō. Hanatarō made a fire and the five talked and told their stories, while Adam and Alex were asleep, snoring.
    Hanatarō
     
  16. ADogX

    ADogX R.I.P. Captain Unohana

    The Journey Begins: Save Rukia Kutchki!

    "So let me get this straight. You guys are from another world, and you have no idea what your supposed to be doing here?" Ganju asked Antonio and Leo. Adam and Alex were still asleep.

    "Right. We were told to kill someone. Dark Blood I think was his name," Antonio explained.

    "You guys are called the Destiny Warriors, by some bodyless being name Destiny Guardian? What the hell?" Ichigo asked,

    "Sounds scary and unreal. You guys sure you didn't hit your heads from the fall when you entered the Seireitei?" Hanataro asked. Antonio brought out his Keyblades and Leo brought out his Shurikens.

    "Two things wrong with that. Our weapons can pop into our hands from light, and we both are talking about the same thing. When our brothers wake up, you can ask them and they'll tell you the same exact story," Leo said. His and Antonio made their weapons dissapear again.

    "If that's the case, and because you beat the Third Seat from Squad 11, maybe you can help us save the Rukia girl we're trying to save," Ganju offered.

    "Ganju's right. We could use your help," Ichigo added.

    "I guess, but let me asked Adam and Alex. Who knows, maybe we're supposed to help you guys," Antonio decided. He finally woke Adam and Alex, who stared at Ichigo, Ganju, and Hanataro in confusement.

    "Um...what's going on here?" Adam asked.

    "Yeah and who are these freaks?" Alex asked. Ichigo and Ganju grew furious and started yelling at Alex.

    "Who are you calling freaks!?" They both shouted

    "Guys, guys, please be quiet. We don't want anyone to know we're here," Hanataro explained. Antonio and Leo pulled Adam and Alex aside and told them the story. Then they walked back to Ichigo and the others.

    "Alright we'll help. Maybe this time I can get into some good fighting," Alex joyfully said.

    "You sound like your from Squad 11. It's kinda scary," Hanataro said. Alex just gave an annoyed face.

    "Little brat," Alex said aside to himself.

    "So while saving this Rukia person, who were the other people that were helping you?" Adam asked.

    "Their names are Chad, Orihime, Uryu, and Yoruichi. Yoruichi is a cat just so you guys know," Ichigo explained.

    "Ok....well we won't get anywhere standing in these sweres no will we? Good thing we ran into you guys. We probably wouldn't last long," Antonio said. So he, his brothers, and his new allies began to move to where Rukia was being held, in hopes of saving her.
     
  17. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    It is ok. You have a couple of erros but it is ok. -_- AND PLEASE STOP USING DIFFERENT COLORS! I am using the KHP 2.0 Black site background and your different colors are making it hard to read. Actually, you really do not need to use different colors to tell the readers who is speaking. We can all tell just by which character would be speaking. If not, you can specify some more. I did the different colors a couple of times and believe me, it makes your story more tacky and people can hardly read.
     
  18. FatewithFury

    FatewithFury New Member

    exellent luv it and like summmoner said stop the colors...
     
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