Kingdom hearts Fan Fic

Thank you guys, i've been really busy, i'm gonna post more of the story soon..sooo soorry for the delay

 

Chapter 12
(The long awaited and longer delayed)

“By Rorex!” The dwarf gasped. The heroes around him could only stare.
“Firaga!” Erah yelled,
“Blizaga” Sora said,
“Thundaga” Riku followed suit,
“Magnaga” Kairi said, all four of them aiming for the dragons head. The keyblades shone for a moment than the light went out.
“Sorry to disappoint you. But magic doesn’t work on a dragon!” The Dragon roared.
“Perhaps this will!” Rhodis yelled. He put one foot on Aroths shoulder and his other foot on Aroths back.
“Ready!” Aroth yelled than he jumped as hard as he could going maybe ten feet in the air. Rhodis roared and Jumped off Aroths body at the peak of their jump. Even with the combo they were no where near high enough.
“Rave!” Aroth yelled still falling, he threw his keyblade up and it landed under Rhodis. Rhodis rode the blade up another ten feet than Jumped again. Now he was very close. he swung his keyblade and it bounced off the thick scales on the dragon.
The dragon roared in laughter and swatted Rhodis to the ground with one of it’s large claws. It sent the young man falling fast with horrid speed. He hit the ground before anyone could help him. His legs hit first and that is what saved his life. His legs were very broken.
The Dragon smiled and launched large spikes from it’s tail towards them. Erah was about to cast Reflectaga when the large man with a shield and armor stepped in front of her and blocked the spikes with his shield. The armored man yelled out a battle cry in a different language than that of Caramon. the man ran under the dragon and yelled a challenge in the common language.
“Worm, think you can slay a dragon?” Luxard hissed spilling saliva onto the ground. The spit burned and sizzled the ground. The dragon laughed at the small knight. It would have kept laughing but an arrow glided beside the dragons fragile thin wings.
The man named Tanis reloaded his bow and shot again very fast but this time Luxard was ready. A shower of light stormed from it’s throat. Inside the light crawled an army of Gambler nobodies.
“Tanis what are these?” The small man with pointed ears asked the red headed archer.
“They are nobodies.” Riku said jumping besides the short man and the dwarf.
“Don’t bother with the small ones.” Raistlin said standing besides his brother. “Me and Caramon can handle them, Tanis, Flint, Tas and Sturm will stall the dragon. The rest of you go get help. The nights are near here. I’m sure they can be convinced to come.”
“Alright, we’ll go.” Sora said turning to run but he found a breastplate in his face. Heavily plated armor with the symbol of a crown on it.

(I'll post Chapter thirteen in a few more days XD)

 

Hey guys, it's been great posting my story here but I have talked with a few people at ABTECH and they agree i shouldn't just post the story without more feedback so this next Chapter, XIII is going to be one of the last ones i post in a very long time..... sorry.

Chapter XIII

“No need. They sent me.” A tall masculine man said. He looked at the surroundings and shrugged. There were large trees with buildings in them.
“Perfect.” The knight grinned. Sora chopped trough some of the nobodies near the knight.
“Clear a way to that tree!” The night ordered the man Sturm who was in armor protecting Erah.
“Sir, she needs help.” Sturm protested.
“That is an order young Knight.” The tall man yelled. Sturm ran up and chopped straight through the nobodies at an alarming rate. The large knight ran behind him holding only a gold trimmed knife. When they reached the tree another barrage of needles swarmed down towards the group. Riku used his dark shield and blocked them all. Tanis fired an arrow again slicing straight through the thin membrane of the dragons left wing.
“I’ll Kill you Worm!” The dragon yelled.
“Not before I slay you!” Yelled the tall knight. The whole group turned and watched in slow motion as the Knight ran up the side of the tree till it was around twenty feet below the dragon. He flipped backwards off the tree and landed on the dragons snout.
“Paxin! Please don’t...” The dragon begged but before he could finish the knight drove his knife into the eye of the dragon. It roared in pain. Another one of Tanis’s arrows shot through the same wing of the dragon. Blinded by pain the dragon fell from the sky. The armored night stabbed again and again into the eye the dragon. When they hit the ground a large cloud of dust filled the air. The whole group ran up to the scene. Raistlin had to be helped by his brother.
The dust cleared and the armored man was standing on the dragons bleeding head. It’s giant lungs still breathed slowly and his throat gurgled on the blood clogging his throat.
“Young knight! What is your name?!” The tall man said.
“I am Sturm Brightblade sir.” The knight said standing rigged and firm frozen in fear of being reprimanded by a higher ranking man.
“I know you wanted to protect the lady but,” Sturm prepared for the verbal blow that never came. “She didn’t need it. She is a very good fighter. I honor your attempt to protect her though at the risk of your life. This beast’s life is yours. Take it and become a dragon slayer.” The tall knight said.
Sturm stood speechless and white. The giant best had twitched when it heard it’s fate decided. Sturm looked long and hard at the beast.
“I can’t cut it’s head off with this sword. The scales are too hard.” Sturm said eyeing the thick scales on the dragons body.
“I don’t think it will need to be. This beast is a man. No dragon would call a mere man by it’s name. Red robed magi, can you force him to change?”
“No” Raistlin coughed from under his hood. All men present looked at the dragon.
“Perhaps the big keys can unlock the man inside it?” Piped a small voice. The knight sharply turned towards to the small man.

 

DAMN! I lost all my story so if I will post more, i have to rewrite it.

I would like to know, what is everyones thoughts on my story so far?

 

Hey guys, sorry for the VERY long delay....i've been writing. I added a lot more to the KH fan fic and a DBZ fan fiction as well. Do you guys want the next chapter?

 

Chapter 14


“Perhaps.” Aroth said stepping up to the dragon. He pointed his giant blade at the beasts chest. A white glow filled the air but the dragon remained the same.
The beast gurgled what was supposed to be a laugh.
“Sturm look! The scales are gone, isn’t that amazing!” The small man shrieked in glee. Sturm smiled and unsheathed his sword. The dragons good eye opened wide with terror as it watched the knight approach. A swift bright flash of his sword and the dragons throat was slit. It began to disintegrate into nothing. Before it faded it looked at the tall man.
“Paxin?”
“What did he say?” Aroth said stepping up to the knight.
“He knows my name well.” The knight said. “I wasn’t born on this world. I was born on a beautiful planet that this man destroyed. Before the darkness took me I was able to through my sword into him.”
“What was the name he called you?” Aroth said still holding his keyblade firmly.
“My name is Pathin Weis.” The knight bowed and turned to leave.
“Sir what of the war against the dragon highlords.” Sturm said rushing up sheathing a sword.
“The army of the highlord could easily take Solace. I am going to Solamnia to gather my elite forces to take down a highlord who handles white dragons.” Pathin said calmly turning and walking away.
“Where are we?” Rhodis asked Tanis in the building in the tree later. It was called the “inn of last home”.
“You are in Solace, on the world of Krynn.” Tanis said wryly. He had almond shaped eyes and pointed ears. No one else in the inn was like him.
“Rhodis, Aroth , Erah. I am afraid of something.” Sora spoke up. the whole inn turned to face him.
“Marluxia.” Riku said softly looking down. Erah was sitting beside him and they were holding hands with fingers weaved.

“Darkness consumes us all, one by one we are born and one by one we die. Each of us is born into the nothingness we will exit into, not knowing the power we contain.” A hooded woman said in the hall of naught.
“Light shines in the void and illuminates the lies we are forged in, and in that forge each of us is shaped of everything that when we die our bodies become such again.” A hooded man said standing back to back with the woman.
“Yin and Yang. Push and pull. first and final breath. Life and death. Dark and light. Together we are one of death.” They said together.
“Bravo.” Jynx said holding a large spike in his hand. “Now, show me your skill with combat.”
“Against who.” The male voice said.
“Us!” Two familiar voices said at once. Riku’s voice and Ansem the wise’s.
“This should be good!” Jynx said sitting on a throne of purple energy.