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The New Organization 2: Rematch

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Oath, Nov 14, 2008.

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  1. Seraphim

    Seraphim Banned

    Blexieis hid his face from the kiss, "Indeed, get a room" to bad though, "Yes...somthing happened while I was gone" he thought.
     
  2. Shikamaru

    Shikamaru That one guy

    Hunter just smiles as her hugs her close, "We can have some alone time now." He whispers as he teleports both of them away and alone. "I told you, not even death could keep me from you."
     
  3. Blade

    Blade Heroes Have One or Two

    >Gee, everybody forgot about alph already. i'm gonna do something stupid, now that there's no bad guys.<
    Alph's greeting was ignored. "*sigh* Looks like I'm more of a Nobody than the others,"he said to himself. He walked away, far away, until he heard somebody say," Didn't think you could escape from us, did you?"
    "Aw man,"Alph moaned. "Can't you guys give me a break?"
    "Nope," said someone else's voice, it was a bit younger."We'll always find you." 6 figures appeared and surrounded Alph.
    "I really don't have time for this,"Alph said, but he got ready to fight anyway.
     
  4. Oath

    Oath King Bitch™

    Toru sighed "Well it's either that or we just kill either Hunter or Ruby without Jaxx's knowledge and I found that unfair."

    *Uh, blademasterfan we already got a bad guy four actually.*
     
  5. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    "Wouldn't want that to happen," Voltair said, "I'd be forced to try and keep them alive. I'm not a big fan of people dying."
     
  6. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Kat walked back up to the group, "Uh... hey Blex." she said with a half smile. She hadn't seen him since he and Hunter were little. She wasn't sure if he would even remember her.

    Jaxx looked around, for the first time in three years she was alone with Hunter. She knew it was really him, but part of her refused to believe it. She had put locks on her heart after Hunter died, Ruby had been the only person who had broken them in a long time besides Kat but they still argued all the time. She didn't want to get close to anyone anymore because she hurt them one way or annother.
    Despite the fact that she was thinking all of the above plus some she knew it was really Hunter and she smiled. "Doesn't mean I missed you any less." she said suddenly she hugged him, not wanting him to disapear or something and prove that she had officially gone insane and was seeing things. She had so may questions and so much to say she ended up saying everything way too fast. "Where were you? How long have you been back? Oh Hunter I've missed you so much."
     
  7. Shikamaru

    Shikamaru That one guy

    He hugged her back, feeling her pressed against him, her hair tickling his nose. "OH baby you have no idea how much i have wanted this." He pulled back and looked her in the eyes. "That guy back there who claimed to be is an old shaman i trusted when i would have done anything to see you, but hes gone now." He says with a smile.
     
  8. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Jaxx smiled, "Thats the second time you've gotten into trouble because of me." she said it kind of sad but she was smiling despite how hard she tried to stop. "Third actually but whos counting." she kissed him.
    "I wish you'd take a break with the hero thing before you get hurt again. That is not something I would like to see again any time soon."
     
    Last edited: Dec 18, 2008
  9. Shikamaru

    Shikamaru That one guy

    Hunter grins after kissing her, "Well you know me babe, that whole hero thing is just too much work, but i cant help it."
     
  10. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Jaxx stopped herself from rolling her eyes "Yes you are most deffinately the best hero at heart." she said partly teasing him. She got serious again, "What he said before though... that Shamen." she said a little hesitantly. Either she was hesitating to ask her question because she wasn't sure if he would be offended by it or she was just plain afraid of the answer. She sighed and shook her head and looked at him in the eyes trying to put emphasis to her words "Hunter, you know I would rather die in the most painful way there ever was created a hundred times over than hurt you right?"

    EDIT:
    Kat sighed "We may as well head back to home base for now. Knowing them, theres really no point of waiting for them because we would be here for a while." she smiled "Ruby, your mom just contacted me through Telepathy. She says you're supposed to practice a little until she gets back. She plans on sparring with you."
     
    Last edited: Dec 19, 2008
  11. Blade

    Blade Heroes Have One or Two

    Alph started to walk back."Eh, I'll just have to get used to everyone ignoring me, again."
     
    Last edited: Dec 18, 2008
  12. Shikamaru

    Shikamaru That one guy

    *stop this crap blademaster, you think you can just create baddies? douche bag*
     
  13. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    *lolz ~let us all speak kind words to eachother~ :p
    JK JK I really hate that song but why not bug you all with my amazing cheezy song skills. lol
    Anyway guys I think this RP is getting WAY off track and not being rude but frankly it's ticking me off.
    I don't like a few things that we wrote here and there and the whole Jaxx being poisened by a villan that doesn't seem to remember this RP and the fact that everyone seems to be dissagreeing at everything at all is getting quite old. So here we have options:

    1: We change some of the things thats ticking me off (Ergo: Ruby being Jaxx's daughter, Caxz poisening Jaxx.)
    2: We just start the whole thing over and try again from a new start
    3: We split the RP in half like we did last time this happened to save both sides of the story.

    So post your oppinions guys. OPT- 1, 2, or 3.
     
    Last edited: Dec 19, 2008
  14. Shikamaru

    Shikamaru That one guy

    1!!!!!!!!!!
     
  15. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    I vote for option #1.
     
  16. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    I say we give #1 a shot too.

    Things I want changed:
    1- Sorry but we have to downsize on the villan count. Oath, Blade, Sao, and KeybladerX all have a villan and as we have experienced from the other one, multipule villans just get confusing and screw the whole story up.
    2- Sorry Kairi but I have to say Oath and I were stupid when we made Ruby Jaxx's daughter because frankly it doesn't make much sence and It's making me feel old and also it's making Jaxx too much like Jasmine which is something she hates more than anything in the whole world so yeah...
    3- Oath you might have to revise what the Twilight Order is planning a little because if Ruby is no longer Jaxx's kid then the thing that is pissing them off so bad is gone and they have no issue with Hunter or Jaxx anymore.

    (Ok, thats just a few things that I find wrong but I know there are things that are ticking you guys off to so...)
     
  17. Blade

    Blade Heroes Have One or Two

    no villains from me. dont wanna ruin another story.
     
  18. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Lol don't worry Blade we're not mad at you :p
    Shika is just kind of rude sometimes. He cant help it lol

    Anyway I'll go back and change and delete a few posts and then we can start up again.
     
  19. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    OOC: Ok so were starting a new or what? We can probaly go to right before Jaxx was poisoned, I mean Ruby didn't know she was Jaxx's daughter, evile Hinter dude if we still have him didn't kill anybody yet I don't think, and the people all met up again. So that might be a good place, plus since I do want the keyblade and stuff, I can get later as we progress.
     
  20. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Okay after much thought and effort and all that jazz I've come up with our changed plot... .

    Characters we are keeping

    Good Guys

    Shikamaru- Hunter (Just killed the shamen guy and everyone is just barely discovering that he's alive and not evil)

    KeyofHope777- Jaxx, Kat (Jaxx is not poisened or anything like that. She is also not a mother sorry but i think Oath and I were a litte too tired when we made that up because it is verry uncharacteristic for Jaxx to be the motherly type of person for quite a few reasons: She's a nobody and probably can't even have children because well hello they can't even age right so how can she have a daughter? Ruby would be eighty while Jaxx would still look like she was in her twentys! Also Jaxx never wanted to be anything like her somebody, Jasmine who is the mother of three and after seeing what Jasmine went through that kind of thing was one of Jaxx's biggest fears, and she's got commitment issues that made her avoid the subject of getting married having children or even having the same room with her bf. Besides it makes me feel old which is something that I shouldn't feel because i'm only like 17 so there!) (Kat and Jaxx still argue a lot and both of them are still protective of Ruby.)

    Desert Warrior- Voltiar (Just got back from an adventure of his own and met up with Jaxx and Destiny Island just before they left to find King Mickey.)

    OathkeeperXIII- Page, Blake (Page and Blake have been with Jaxx, Kat, and Ruby for a long time now. Almost a year.)

    Kairi Star- Ruby (Her mother is Leaxa and she is still learning about magic. She's still pretty strong and a total loudmouth. Jaxx constantly teases that Ruby is the reason that Jaxx will never want to have children.)

    blademasterfan- Alph (Alph was supposedly dead in the first one and nobody really knows how he got back. He is not being chased by assasins or bounty hunters sorry blade but that adds to the stress a little.)

    Sephiroth- Blexieis (Blexy just came back from a long journey of his own. He is Hunters and Kat's little brother and a bit of a trouble maker. He knew about Hunter's death and how Kat killed him so when he comes back to investigate boy is he supprised when Kat is sort of a friend of Jaxx's and Hunter is alive after all.)

    Bad guys

    Oathkeeper- Toru (Toru is a high ranking member of an organization called the Twilight Order who are basicly in charge of keeping the balance between Good and Evil in control and also making sure Kingdom Hearts remains neutral. They really aren't good or bad guys as a whole but right now our heros all together tip the balance between good and evil WAY too far and that has gotten them involved. Toru seems to know Page somehow.)



    Story​

    Jaxx, Kat, Ruby, Page, and Blake live on Destiny Island because that is where they found Ruby who is Kingdom Heart's chosen next Princess of Heart. Ruby just passed off her Light and is now a master with Light and hand to hand combat but she still has a lot to learn so Jaxx took her to King Mickey. King Mickey is the person who decides wether or not Ruby is ready to handle her powers as a princess of heart but Mickey said 'no she's not ready' so Jaxx still has a lot to teach Ruby before she can become a princess of heart. Menwhile Hunter comes back from the dead and kills a whole city full of people looking for Jaxx because he is a crazy bastard and thats how he rolls.
    THEN Jaxx and Ruby went to investiage the dead people becaue Ruby convinced Jaxx that it was the right thing to do and Jaxx immedieately senced that Hunter had been there. At first she went all crazy and Ruby was very confused but Jaxx wouldn't tell her anything. Jaxx gave Ruby her keyblade and then she put Hunter's katana over where Hunter's grave use to be and left him her cute little message of sadness and all kinds of tearful ouchieness and then Voltiar showed up and he's all like. 'Guys, we're in big trouble because the Twilight Order is ticked off at you all and I don't know why." and Jaxx was all like "It's probably because we tip their little scale of good and evil too far." and then they went to find Hunter and figure out why he's acting like such a stupid jerkface and Hunter almost kills them all with his amazing powers to make things blow up and people to go :eek:
    But then out of nowhere just when all hope seemed to be lost and all of them were going to destroy everything in their fight here comes the REAL hunter to save the day and he tells everyone what really happened and why he was being such an evil jerkface. It turns out that Hunter wasn't really lost but he did want to get back to Jaxx and the others so he trusted this shamen guy to bring him back and the shamen agreed. BUT under one condition and that condition was that Hunter's powers would be under his control as well. Hunter accepted without really thinking about it because that's just how he rolls I guess and then the shamen guy beat Hunter to his friends and tried to kill them all. His motives are still unknown.
    Then Blexy showed up and Hunter, Blex and Kat got in a big fight because both of the guys thought she was evil and Kat wasn't going to just stand there and let them kill her. Jaxx and Page interviended and told them why Kat killed Hunter and at first both of them were pissed off because Jaxx was friends with the chick that killed Hunter but arguments don't last long when someone you love comes back from the dead after three years and you've missed them like crazy.​
     
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