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The New Organization

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Desert Warrior, Feb 10, 2011.

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  1. Mar 14, 2011 #21
    Become

    Become Resident Tashian Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    If you're going to give her a bunch of ice related abilities, then why not make her element ice?
     
  2. Mar 14, 2011 #22
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    It doesn't matter. Just know that I do not want a main organization character and that my person is not a part or tied to any Organization XIII-related members with no ranks.
     
  3. Mar 14, 2011 #23
    Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    well i can't really think of time spells. So Ice kinda reminds me of time characters... (idk why) but so yeah that's why
     
  4. Mar 14, 2011 #24
    Roxel The ultimate nobody

    Roxel The ultimate nobody Banned

    Is that directed towards me because my character changed drastically?
     
  5. Mar 14, 2011 #25
    Become

    Become Resident Tashian Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Then just give her Ice as an Element.

    1) There's more that can be done with it within roleplaying rules.
    2) It's not as much of a cop-out.

    And Roxel, I'm pretty sure that Destiny says that because in the first attempt at this RP you seemed to be thrusting your character into a second in command post, despite him being unstable in personality.
     
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  6. Mar 14, 2011 #26
    Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Duties will be divided amongst members. Xyliar decides everything, and each member in charge of something will report directly to her. My Organization character Motx will hand out missions that Xyliar decides since he's the record keeper. One member will be in charge of finances. Another will be in charge of making sure each member's fighting skill isn't dulled out (Basically a training coach. If a member isn't doing anything, this member can take them aside and test them to see if they've gotten stronger or weaker). If members are sent out on group missions, they work as a team unless a group leader is assigned. Also, there will be one specific member who is apart from the rest of the Organization. That member answers directly to Xyliar and nobody else. They will usually not be working with other members unless Xyliar says so. Finally (One last thing I forgot to mention), if a character is a brand new recruit, then they are at the bottom of the food chain. They may not be ordered around like a servant, but on missions they might want to take the advice of a senior member.

    Okay, let's see about characters.....

    Requiem - Accepted
    Zerieth - Both accepted
    Summoner - Did you not read point 2 on that rant I had? Your character is fine, except for two things. No power to restore hearts and no power that could potentially create Kingdom Hearts. Remove those and you're in.
    Adog - Accepted
    Destiny - Accepted
    Roxel - No multiple elements. Pick one and stick with it. Your powers have almost nothing to do with your element. And pick a single weapon, preferably something that is unique.
    Roaringflames - Accepted
    Zol - Raixo is accepted, but spot VIII is taken (By my character, in case you were wondering). I also wonder why have fira and aero as spells when your element is thunder. And also, if you want, you can have more than just the three thunder spells. Xel is also fine, with the exception of the spells. They don't really have much to do with time. If you want spells, just have slow and haste or something. Or you can change your element to something more appropriate.
    Zhyriad - Accepted

    Also, something I forgot to mention. Keyblades. Your characters are welcome to have them (But let's keep the numbers low. I don't want this to be an RP about keyblade wielders). But you want to make sure that the keyblade is unique to your characters. Adog and Roaringflames, both your character sheets say that your character uses Oblivion. Talk it out amongst yourselves who uses it. Whichever of you gives up Oblivion go and find a different keyblade. Oh, and no Ultima Weapons.
     
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  7. Mar 14, 2011 #27
    Become

    Become Resident Tashian Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Is my re-furbished character in?
     
  8. Mar 14, 2011 #28
    Roxel The ultimate nobody

    Roxel The ultimate nobody Banned

    Yea I edited mine
     
  9. Mar 14, 2011 #29
    Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Yep. I totally forgot though when I was making the list.

    I went back and looked at it. I edited your powers so they make more sense, and so that he doesn't have the potential to be a huge godmod. In addition to that, I have removed what you put as being in the position as being the one member who is basically Xyliar's right hand. I haven't decided who that will be yet. If more people are going to join, then I will decide once they have. I also removed part of the personality, again for a few reasons. First off, we're not even going to bother getting into the details of which member is smarter than the rest. Secondly, I don't think you would want to control a character that is supposed to be the 'strong, silent' type. If you want to move his personality around a bit, go right ahead. But I advise you stick with a personality you can do, especially if you want to be one of the more active members of this RP.

    EDIT: I must've deleted at least 150 posts from this thread alone. Gotta remember to do it a faster way next time I do something like that.
     
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  10. Mar 14, 2011 #30
    Roxel The ultimate nobody

    Roxel The ultimate nobody Banned

    Am I good?
     
  11. Mar 14, 2011 #31
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Whoops! I read it but I thought that I took it out after I had copied and pasted. Thank you for seeing that. Well, it wouldn't bother me anyways if it was in there or not but it was just an idea since this is going to be a plotless roleplay. I had changed it those powers into something else.
     
  12. Mar 14, 2011 #32
    Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    My character has changed, I prefer an original, if I can get to my computer the bottom weapon is gone, if I can't I'll ask a moderator to fix it, if they can.
     
  13. Mar 14, 2011 #33
    Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    That character is now fine. Although you haven't really detailed out the summonings. What can she summon, what limitations are there to her summonings, and how many summons can be present at once? (Goes along with limitations, but I figured I'd cover the basics)

    Just VM me whatever you want changed.
     
  14. Mar 14, 2011 #34
    Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    Edited Xel made her rank XI and changed Raixo's Rank to VII
     
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  15. Mar 14, 2011 #35
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Meh. it is just that one summon that I had put down. Just want to let everyone know that she can summon once she acquires the ability later on in the story.
     
  16. Mar 14, 2011 #36
    Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    The Internet, shit, I can not even leave this site just to find a picture so enjoy this

    Name- Aexlly
    Tittle- Storm runner
    Somebody name- Keally(Dropped k, found useless)
    Age- 23
    Rank- X
    Gender- Female
    Home World- Radiant Garden, the city of light

    Element- Love, she uses it to blind someone, make them come towards her and then BAM!!, she fires a round from her guns to this persons head. She also controls wind, since her somebody's 23rd birthday(First one joke, second I'm serious).

    Abilities-
    Brutal canon
    Storm
    Slash gale
    Raising wind

    Appearance- http://game.watch.impress.co.jp/docs/20090128/arc006.jpg, she wears the org. Coat with the stomach part cut of to make her look more sexy and she has blue hair instead of purple.

    Weapon- man eater, in the pic, she has two of em

    Personality- Aexlly is a warm hearted open minded person who just wants to help others. As of to why, it is because she was kind hearted in her past life and was a member of the restoration commite and helped out with heartless. An example would be that she would help someone with some sort thing, they're wanting to do.

    History- Her somebody was born on radiant garden to a pair of gin smiths, who liked the art of craftery. While she was growing, heartless attacked her parents while they were out and the restoration commite decided to take her in. That was then that she started to use the guns her parents crafted for her to fight heartless off. On her 23rd birthday, she wad presented the gift of wind and decided to practice on heartless. It had no great effect, but some aborsed it and sent it right back at her, making her flinch. While she was flinching, they dog piled her and then stole her heart. She awoke in a white room with a bed and some supplies and a new name was given to her, Aexlly.
     
  17. Mar 14, 2011 #37
    Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    That one is good. I'll go edit the first post in the thread to show who's in and I'll make the proper thread again so we can begin.
     
  18. Mar 14, 2011 #38
    Become

    Become Resident Tashian Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    No offense to Hope, but wouldn't she fall into that slot of people who aren't always active?
     
  19. Mar 14, 2011 #39
    Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Yep. Which is why I'm taking control of her characters.
     
  20. Mar 15, 2011 #40
    Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Umm, I decided after some long thought to nuke Xenal. I don't really wanna play him. I will be replacing him with someone more suitable to my needs. This will be his replacement, in the same spot.

    Name: Natex (Tane)
    Appearance Age: 15
    Rank: IV
    Gender: M
    Appearance:[​IMG]
    Weapon: Analytical Thinking, This scythe :[​IMG]

    Cept it's all black. A white ribbon is wrapped around the whole thing until the weapon is put into serious mode. Has three modes:
    1. Sealed (all wrapped up. Can't really kill)
    2. Half Sealed (the blade is still wrapped and the rest is unwrapped. Weapon is stronger but can't actually kill. Darkness begins to ooze out of it.
    3. Unsealed (Weapon is totally unwrapped, the cloth hangs from the handle just under the blade. It flaps in the breeze, and the weapon becomes out of control with the wielder unable to fully handle it. The weapon essentially fights at its own pace, and Natex is just along for the ride.

    History: Before he became a nobody, Tane was in the head of his class as a computer genious. He didn't do well with the ladies, and was always picked on by the bigger boys. Now that he is a nobody he still shows his old tendencies i.e. alayzing every situation and also being anti social forsaking friends for his computer. He became a nodoby by learning how to wield a scythe then fighting heartless, having decided to be a champion himself. He was tragically defeated and the heartless took his heart away. Now he desperately wants it back, and will go to any lengths.

    Fighting style: He tends towards not fighting at all but that doesn't mean he can't. Being a budding scythe wielder he keeps his weapon sealed so as to block its dark powers from the world. When he feels strongly enough about a fight he goes all out, unleashing his weapon into half mode and allowing himself to move about the field by defying gravity. If he is left with no other option he completely unleashes the weapon and then kills all in his path. He become unable to distinguish between friend and foe.

    Powers: Gravity Manipulation around himself, and shooting dark energy waves. The waves are amplified when issuing from the scythe though that can only be done in half mode or higher. The weapon is designed to kill, and is never released until Natex decides to kill his foe.
     
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